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Us
Interconnecting;
You into me - as myself; your sheath
Untangling and unraveling-
Our souls and minds unified
Hearts in pulsation-
Yours accompanying mine
With tenacity-
Our bare knuckled hands clasp
Simentaniosly stimulated -
Now inhabited - you onto me
The fluid of our lust in fellowship-
Welded is now our form
You into me - as myself; your sheath
Untangling and unraveling-
Our souls and minds unified
Hearts in pulsation-
Yours accompanying mine
With tenacity-
Our bare knuckled hands clasp
Simentaniosly stimulated -
Now inhabited - you onto me
The fluid of our lust in fellowship-
Welded is now our form
Published 10th Oct 2018
| Edited 1st Mar 2019
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- Edited 10th Oct 2018 10:46pm
10th Oct 2018 10:39pm
Now that is what I mean by essentially in clarity! You don't need to be long to create a picture but you need to create a bang that says everything. My dearest Pandora, you are always elegant even when talking about the most intimate arguments. It's a very difficult virtue for a writer and you have mastered it. Beautiful.
13th Oct 2018 3:11am
10th Oct 2018 10:41pm
13th Oct 2018 3:11am
13th Oct 2018 8:29am
Favourite lines, summing up the climax of union:
The fluid of our lust in fellowship-
Welded is now our form
The fluid of our lust in fellowship-
Welded is now our form
13th Oct 2018 4:33pm
Thank you my friend. I'm truly trying to create my own style outside my norm, so the approval is so welcome !!
28th Feb 2019 3:37pm
You have such a beautiful way of inking erotic. I say it a lot but you are an incredible poet.
1st Mar 2019 00:49am
Now you have me blushing. Lol. Thank you for reading an oldie & being so generous with the thoughts & add!!
