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His Subsidy
Pining for a taste; a bead of his opaque excitement does my tongue bequest , as for every drop am I wistful. The urge to be savored upon my palette; his salty but sweet subsidy ; such is the allocation that I covet. Looking to him above; in my abounding requisition, pretty blue eyes do plead.
Irrepressible is my own self indulgence; for his rapture am I earnest. Wickedly does my tongue lave his entirety; his flavor is that for which I ache . For his pleasure and gratification do I labor to coax from within his core; against my humming tongue, the abandonment of his seed.
He with a different endeavor in mind; against my own impeding desires, from my mouth he withdraws. His urge is to be my misadventure; his sweet and salty subsidy then presented to reside on my face. Eager for his taste was my impulsion, though am I satisfied to have conspired in fulfilling his need.
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Irrepressible is my own self indulgence; for his rapture am I earnest. Wickedly does my tongue lave his entirety; his flavor is that for which I ache . For his pleasure and gratification do I labor to coax from within his core; against my humming tongue, the abandonment of his seed.
He with a different endeavor in mind; against my own impeding desires, from my mouth he withdraws. His urge is to be my misadventure; his sweet and salty subsidy then presented to reside on my face. Eager for his taste was my impulsion, though am I satisfied to have conspired in fulfilling his need.
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Published 13th Oct 2018
| Edited 27th Jan 2019
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13th Oct 2018 5:12am
your visioning is easy and wonderful to be swept away by...your seductive and commanding use of language is a real turn on...love this...Lawrence
13th Oct 2018 4:27pm
Thank you so much, Lawrence! A friend has named me a sensual thesaurus of laden words. Lol..I am really having fun with choosing words outside of the box. I'm happy to see they still present a good visual..that is what it's all about !!
13th Oct 2018 4:47pm
13th Oct 2018 8:22am
Reminds me of the line in a recent Rita Ora song: I've got you on the tip of my tongue.
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Wickedly does my tongue lave his entirety; his flavor is that for which I ache .
Favourite line:
Wickedly does my tongue lave his entirety; his flavor is that for which I ache .
13th Oct 2018 4:22pm
13th Oct 2018 11:39am
"a bead of his opaque excitement" ... delicious ... "pretty blue eyes do plead" ... "lave his entirety" ... hot write my sweet poetess ...
13th Oct 2018 4:31pm
Thank you so much, LilDragonFly . I'm glad you found it so. I'm trying my best to create my own style and the approval means more than you know!
13th Oct 2018 6:23pm
15th Oct 2018 3:24am
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13th Oct 2018 6:34pm
The picture you paint is of those a man craves. Foolishly, the well thinking believe that it is a sign of degradation of the woman's dignity. I believe that there is no greater pleasure than to be completely filled or covered by the essence of pleasure, when both share of it with equal dignity. I love to be covered or to take of the release of the other. I see no degradation, so why would the contrary be true? When you give freely, you must be ready to take freely. I love the way you think. Here you, once again, confirm my same thoughts. We share so much. Thank you for giving all of us a taste of your pleasure. You are truly reaching divine notes. Hugs and love to you my friend. J.
14th Oct 2018 9:57pm
We are alike in my ways! Thank you for your assessment as always. In no way is it degrading in my eyes. I will tell you, with an ending like this, results in uncontrollable giggling.;) I'm working hard to build my own little confines of writing and reach a deeper love and use of words. I'm hoping it is working. I do know you added it with an error in which I just noticed - I hate when that happens! Hugs back sweet friend!!
