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His Penchant
With pretension; her thighs so torrid does he then render. Her most vulnerable nerves exposed; amorous hands called to venture as he gently spreads. In gluttony does his mouth hum against her sweet divide; into his sumptuous penchant his tongue then slides.
Immersed in her glistening flesh; himself braced by her legs, vice like in grip is he pinned. Deeper does he feast as with himself bound ; his withdrawal denied. Coiled and without mercy ; trapped is his tongue, enveloped and deeper is it engulfed. Greeted to splash upon his face; her thick rippling tides.
On his lips is her cream then smeared. As does it drip; the scorching heat of her cum down his chin. Her eyes downcast, sated does he find her. Smeared from his carnal fingers to her lips; the taste of her passion does he then offer. Her dewy essense upon his fingers and without hesitation; slowly does she lick from them; the bearing of her taste.
His embodiment stiff; in her sweet scented arousal has he turned primal, his rigidity jutted in her direction. Of her sweet core does he now crave; urestrained does he thrust and then settle ; bathing in her wet warmth. As it trails and it traces upwards, musky is the scent of his mouth. For hers does he find; from her core deep within and placed upon her lips; the fruit of her ecstasy in which he always sates.
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Immersed in her glistening flesh; himself braced by her legs, vice like in grip is he pinned. Deeper does he feast as with himself bound ; his withdrawal denied. Coiled and without mercy ; trapped is his tongue, enveloped and deeper is it engulfed. Greeted to splash upon his face; her thick rippling tides.
On his lips is her cream then smeared. As does it drip; the scorching heat of her cum down his chin. Her eyes downcast, sated does he find her. Smeared from his carnal fingers to her lips; the taste of her passion does he then offer. Her dewy essense upon his fingers and without hesitation; slowly does she lick from them; the bearing of her taste.
His embodiment stiff; in her sweet scented arousal has he turned primal, his rigidity jutted in her direction. Of her sweet core does he now crave; urestrained does he thrust and then settle ; bathing in her wet warmth. As it trails and it traces upwards, musky is the scent of his mouth. For hers does he find; from her core deep within and placed upon her lips; the fruit of her ecstasy in which he always sates.
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Published 10th Oct 2018
| Edited 27th Jan 2019
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Anonymous
10th Oct 2018 1:52am
Very very hot indeed. This is erotica. This is chanting pleasure. A fusion of fluids, of minds and bodies. There is nothing more beautiful than savouring the other and finding your own taste upon their skin, meaning that one completes the other and is United in complicity with each other. The words here flow like the bodies and the fluids that are the result of a conquered hunger, that is momentaneously sated. Excellent as always. J
10th Oct 2018 2:15am
Yes Sir, exactly as you said it, which you always do so well! I believe this to be true as well. I'm just grateful something tangible came to mind.;) Thanks for the add and you just being your sensual and intelligent self; for your comments make me feel I did something right. Hugs back my friend..
10th Oct 2018 2:38am
another delicious and tasty morsel delivered in a lyrical cascade...a most delight full read Pandora
10th Oct 2018 3:08am
10th Oct 2018 4:53am
We read this earlier but held off commenting until we read again, just that freaking good. Nice piece
10th Oct 2018 5:21pm
Well I do thank you for the confirmation it had to be read more than once.;)
10th Oct 2018 5:24pm
10th Oct 2018 7:21am
Echo Juvenalis66. Favourite line (for conveyed sense of excitement):
His embodiment stiff; in her sweet scented arousal has he turned primal, his rigidity jutted in her direction.
His embodiment stiff; in her sweet scented arousal has he turned primal, his rigidity jutted in her direction.
10th Oct 2018 5:23pm
Anonymous
10th Oct 2018 9:27am
What an erotic flow !!!
DDAAYYYUUMMMM !!!
DDAAYYYUUMMMM !!!
10th Oct 2018 5:24pm
10th Oct 2018 5:36pm
VaVa Voom - Better than coffee in the morning. Excellent sensual writing that described intimacy and primal urge while maintaining a flowing connection.
10th Oct 2018 6:04pm
Now that is what I love to read.. Thank you for such an encouraging comment!
