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Hypnosis
Breathe in, breathe out
Clear your mind and focus on my voice
Close yourself off from the outside world
And do what I say, for you have no choice.
Find your inner sanctum
Tell me what it is that you feel
Your soul thawing out from its frozen prison
With a little hypnosis, it can become real.
Breathe in, breathe out
Focus on calming down your heartbeat
Extend your senses beyond the physical world
Your mind has left this world behind, even though your body’s still in the seat.
Have you seen heaven?
Or perhaps you’ve been burnt by the image of hell
Either way, you don’t want to go back
With a little hypnosis, whatever difference there is, you won’t be able to tell.
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I don’t care that it’s all in my head
I want to go back to the garden
Stop screwing with my emotions and leave me in peace
I’m tired of the living world where I’m only a burden.
Please, just let me go
I’ve lost my peace here, and I need to find it again
Just leave me alone, if you’ve got nothing helpful to say
I won’t get my stability back, even if I somehow make amends.
Please forgive me for fucking up badly
I never wanted this to happen, but it did
This is my last chance of finding happiness again
I don’t care that it’s in my head, I need some hypnosis.
Clear your mind and focus on my voice
Close yourself off from the outside world
And do what I say, for you have no choice.
Find your inner sanctum
Tell me what it is that you feel
Your soul thawing out from its frozen prison
With a little hypnosis, it can become real.
Breathe in, breathe out
Focus on calming down your heartbeat
Extend your senses beyond the physical world
Your mind has left this world behind, even though your body’s still in the seat.
Have you seen heaven?
Or perhaps you’ve been burnt by the image of hell
Either way, you don’t want to go back
With a little hypnosis, whatever difference there is, you won’t be able to tell.
-
I don’t care that it’s all in my head
I want to go back to the garden
Stop screwing with my emotions and leave me in peace
I’m tired of the living world where I’m only a burden.
Please, just let me go
I’ve lost my peace here, and I need to find it again
Just leave me alone, if you’ve got nothing helpful to say
I won’t get my stability back, even if I somehow make amends.
Please forgive me for fucking up badly
I never wanted this to happen, but it did
This is my last chance of finding happiness again
I don’t care that it’s in my head, I need some hypnosis.
Written by
LunasChild8
Published 9th Oct 2018
Author's Note
Partly inspired by zAllex's track with the same name. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xoeBsBO_41Q&index=11&list=PLo9eWWvbpTx6eMmeDlmbrY9g2TUt501Cv&t=0s
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Re. Hypnosis
9th Oct 2018 9:31pm
I like this a lot...I've always felt that a poem should have the same power as a spell...conjuring visions ...you've succeeded in this one S....xlnt
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7th Dec 2018 00:35am
Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
9th Oct 2018 10:07pm
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Re: Re. Hypnosis
7th Dec 2018 00:35am
Re. Hypnosis
11th Oct 2018 4:09am
Perhaps we all self-hypnotize from time to time... the best thing is to put it a rhyme
bravo
Jeff
bravo
Jeff
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Re: Re. Hypnosis
7th Dec 2018 00:36am
Re. Hypnosis
11th Oct 2018 7:59pm
Our soul thawing out from its frozen prison.... almost made the entire piece for me.
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11th Oct 2018 8:09pm
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7th Dec 2018 00:36am
Re. Hypnosis
7th Dec 2018 12:37pm
Excellent piece really enjoyed this👏👏
"Have you seen heaven?
Or perhaps you’ve been burnt by the image of hell
Either way, you don’t want to go back
With a little hypnosis, whatever difference there is, you won’t be able to tell." Excellent verse!👏
"Have you seen heaven?
Or perhaps you’ve been burnt by the image of hell
Either way, you don’t want to go back
With a little hypnosis, whatever difference there is, you won’t be able to tell." Excellent verse!👏
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7th Dec 2018 4:53pm
Re. Hypnosis
7th Dec 2018 5:45pm
Loved listening to and reading this. A classically contrasted experience. And so well done. Congrats.
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7th Dec 2018 5:46pm
Re. Hypnosis
7th Dec 2018 6:11pm
Wow Luna this was a great read, and a clutching recording. You did well with the steady pace & tone to entice a hypnotic state, and the emotional expression for the second half is spot on!
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7th Dec 2018 6:15pm
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Feb 2019 11:45am
8th Dec 2018 12:31pm
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8th Dec 2018 3:43pm
Re. Hypnosis
19th Jan 2019 3:15am
This was mesmerizing...I liked it and your voice was wonderful.
Very hypnotic....
Xo
Very hypnotic....
Xo
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