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Loving you
Loving you is beautiful
With your arms around me
There is nothing so fulfilling
When you are inside me
Loving you is being you
Loving you is bliss
Your kiss sublime
Melted together
In loving kindness
Fused in wondrous pleasure
Loving you is ecstasy
Pleasure divine
Rhythm of synchronicity
Rhyming Poetry
Together entwined
Loving you is a fantasy
An explosion of ingenuity
Born of want
Born of imaginings
A waking dream, we love
With your arms around me
There is nothing so fulfilling
When you are inside me
Loving you is being you
Loving you is bliss
Your kiss sublime
Melted together
In loving kindness
Fused in wondrous pleasure
Loving you is ecstasy
Pleasure divine
Rhythm of synchronicity
Rhyming Poetry
Together entwined
Loving you is a fantasy
An explosion of ingenuity
Born of want
Born of imaginings
A waking dream, we love
Published 2nd Nov 2011
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2nd Nov 2011 9:16pm
This poem was submitted for a competition within this portal, but I felt like sharing it. Thank you.
3rd Nov 2011 00:54am
I find this one blissful, erotic (yes) and sweet. Prolifically stated. : )
3rd Nov 2011 8:52am
Thank You MusicallyMrM, you are kind for saying that although I must admit that when I wrote that it was with that kind of natural high. lol. Thanks again.
3rd Nov 2011 1:31am
3rd Nov 2011 8:52am
3rd Nov 2011 9:50am
The last stanza.:)
Says it all.
And I hope that..this one
shoots like a wild comet
with a tail, evanescent
that flashes and shows
everyone, the soul fire
and gets the Tiara.
Pyaara.
Says it all.
And I hope that..this one
shoots like a wild comet
with a tail, evanescent
that flashes and shows
everyone, the soul fire
and gets the Tiara.
Pyaara.
Thank you Whitewand6...
Swirling through the sands of time
Karmic meeting of two minds
Merge to dance to an adage
set by the ancient
secrets' revelation
Churn out love and need
wishful thoughts
to now, the love is there.
Hai pyaara.
Swirling through the sands of time
Karmic meeting of two minds
Merge to dance to an adage
set by the ancient
secrets' revelation
Churn out love and need
wishful thoughts
to now, the love is there.
Hai pyaara.
4th Nov 2011 7:22am
:))
Speechless as ever.
The way you use 'pyaara'
it tends to make me speechless.
And to be honest, blush a bit.
Write on crazy diamond.
S' aka Pyaara:)
Speechless as ever.
The way you use 'pyaara'
it tends to make me speechless.
And to be honest, blush a bit.
Write on crazy diamond.
S' aka Pyaara:)
