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Impartial
It felt nice
Leveraging stomach
Into an outpour
Of lower limbs
I watched
Grapple with
Pleasure.
Dangling from
Forced entry’s
Impartial
Window.
Leveraging stomach
Into an outpour
Of lower limbs
I watched
Grapple with
Pleasure.
Dangling from
Forced entry’s
Impartial
Window.
Published 8th Oct 2018
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8th Oct 2018 2:30pm
12th Oct 2018 11:29pm
I read this many times and the ending got me each time. Truly fine metaphorical writing with an ending which is more powerful than any I've read in a long time. I may be going off on a limb here but it read like a dom sub encounter where the partner welcomes her lover's forcefulness. Fantastic work.
John
John
31st Oct 2018 4:37pm
