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Grin
She knew exactly
What I wanted
To do
Over tea…
In the woodland’s
Forsaken eye
Just to crawl
Out
Of that petulant
Grin.
What I wanted
To do
Over tea…
In the woodland’s
Forsaken eye
Just to crawl
Out
Of that petulant
Grin.
Published 7th Oct 2018
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12th Oct 2018 2:10am
You open with an incredibly enticing intro and close with a superbly lyrical metaphor "petulant grin." I love how you brilliantly tie your poem together with wit and spice. Truly fine work.
John
John
