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Oblivion
We are what we are
Monsters and villains
Making love stories
In horror houses
And desert islands
While we eat our
Cannibalistic hearts out
Ripping and
Shredding ourselves
And each other
Cursing our mothers
And fathers
While they defile
Our sons and daughters
And the winds of time
Change and
Blow my mind
Like an AK
Holding myself hostage
In the cell of this hell
No pardon no reprieve
For the simple simon deceit
We all baste on ourselves
Drawing from the ink well
Dipping into the vein
Blood stained wall script
That none can decipher
Plays the tune of the piper
Leading down spiral worlds
And spinning into reckless
Oblivion of the decisions
Made by monsters
And villains
Monsters and villains
Making love stories
In horror houses
And desert islands
While we eat our
Cannibalistic hearts out
Ripping and
Shredding ourselves
And each other
Cursing our mothers
And fathers
While they defile
Our sons and daughters
And the winds of time
Change and
Blow my mind
Like an AK
Holding myself hostage
In the cell of this hell
No pardon no reprieve
For the simple simon deceit
We all baste on ourselves
Drawing from the ink well
Dipping into the vein
Blood stained wall script
That none can decipher
Plays the tune of the piper
Leading down spiral worlds
And spinning into reckless
Oblivion of the decisions
Made by monsters
And villains
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Re. Oblivion
6th Oct 2018 2:56am
Are you saying that we are monsters and villains because we occasionally make mistakes. We think that is part of what makes us human our ability to make mistakes and realize it, possibly fix them. No mistakes and we may as well deify ourselves, because we're among the gods.
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6th Oct 2018 3:08am
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6th Oct 2018 3:15am
We agree evil was here before man and we think one of the components that made up this world
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Anonymous
6th Oct 2018 4:41am
Wow! That really powerful Meddy. I hope you're not being tough on yourself because you're a good hearted person.
Great writing!
Matthew.
Great writing!
Matthew.
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6th Oct 2018 4:55am
Re. Oblivion
6th Oct 2018 5:07am
Sounds like everyone's having a good ol' bitch around to me with this write. It's quite a raw one.
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6th Oct 2018 5:36am
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Anonymous
6th Oct 2018 11:00pm
You have expressed fully what I believe. Evil dominates this world but it can be stopped. Words, as I have once stated in an old write, are one of the most powerful weapons. They can be used to do good and they can be used to destroy. An old saying says "The tongue has no bone but it can break bones". I have witnessed this with my own two eyes. We must always use them for the greater good. I loved this write. Excellent expression of a soul who lives beyond the senses. Well done. J
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7th Oct 2018 1:45am
Re. Oblivion
7th Oct 2018 8:13am
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7th Oct 2018 8:17am
You most certainly may!
But ya gotta be a cool villain.
So I can secretly root for you. Lol
But ya gotta be a cool villain.
So I can secretly root for you. Lol
Re. Oblivion
7th Oct 2018 8:23am
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7th Oct 2018 8:25am
If you like, whatever you're pleasure. I mean if you're the villain you kinda make your own rules.
Re. Oblivion
7th Oct 2018 8:27am
Ok.. I was trying to write a deep kinda like horror/lustful.. story.. a villain .. OK a villain I can do.. lol
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7th Oct 2018 8:29am