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Love and Hate
The world it pushes on
whether we come along or not
proding and poking
at times it's evoking
feelings
such a natural thing
in an unnatural state
take love and hate
love on display
lays dormant on end
but with hate, there's no pretend
we rip at each word
at thoughts thought absurd
there are things I have seen
that have chisled and shaped
and others I know
I wish I had escaped
but I go on with my dreams
these hopes, holding my heart
pushing past hate
where love can now start
Sometimes you just have to believe
whether we come along or not
proding and poking
at times it's evoking
feelings
such a natural thing
in an unnatural state
take love and hate
love on display
lays dormant on end
but with hate, there's no pretend
we rip at each word
at thoughts thought absurd
there are things I have seen
that have chisled and shaped
and others I know
I wish I had escaped
but I go on with my dreams
these hopes, holding my heart
pushing past hate
where love can now start
Sometimes you just have to believe
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Re. Love and Hate
24th Sep 2018 1:23pm
Killer line break between the first and second stanzas ... "natural thing/unnatural states" ... love the trick on the ear ... skillful peppering with rhyme ... delightful poem JT ...
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Re. Love and Hate
24th Sep 2018 2:30pm
The world is a mess, but poets need to write and explain it so we all can feel a little better ....
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Re: Re. Love and Hate
24th Sep 2018 2:34pm
Thanks Poet. We try and make sense of something that doesn't make any sense at all.
Re. Love and Hate
Anonymous
24th Sep 2018 2:37pm
It does seem as though negative emotions are more freely expressed. I agree with PoetSpeak...as poets, we've gotta do what we can with our expression.

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Re: Re. Love and Hate
24th Sep 2018 2:42pm
It is a shame that is the case. I wish we could share love just as easily. Thanks Willow
Re. Love and Hate
24th Sep 2018 2:44pm
Yes hate seems to have no limits.
I do hope you’re gettingthrough this revelation
Dear Tim. Happiness after all is a state of mind.
Find your happy within yourself,try new things
Put yourself out there among people you wouldn’t normally even think twice to avoid..
Lol people are not always what they seem...
Hang In there :)
Hugsss
Jackie xx
I do hope you’re gettingthrough this revelation
Dear Tim. Happiness after all is a state of mind.
Find your happy within yourself,try new things
Put yourself out there among people you wouldn’t normally even think twice to avoid..
Lol people are not always what they seem...
Hang In there :)
Hugsss
Jackie xx
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Re: Re. Love and Hate
24th Sep 2018 2:46pm
Thanks Jackie. I was having a discussion with a friend of mine last night about this subject. I am in a happy state even though confusion seeps in at times.
Re: Re. Love and Hate
24th Sep 2018 2:55pm
Smh yes sometimes as readers we assume it’s personal.. my poetry is portrayed as such too.
I have to explain it’s not always about me
Miss you....
Xx Jackie
I have to explain it’s not always about me
Miss you....
Xx Jackie
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Re. Love and Hate
Anonymous
24th Sep 2018 3:43pm
As hard as it mostly feels we have to push through with love, or at least a pure heart. I felt this one deeply JusTim

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Re: Re. Love and Hate
24th Sep 2018 3:51pm
Thank you Soul Girl. Yes we need to keep pushing but I still do wish the emotion of love was more acceptable in our society.
Re. Love and Hate
24th Sep 2018 6:40pm
You're a dreamer, and hopefully one day truly fulfilled. Meanwhile the poetic struggle goes on. I feel your reply above. Without love society crumbles. Great job, JusTim!
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Re: Re. Love and Hate
24th Sep 2018 6:51pm
Yes I am a dreamer but also a realist so don't get caught with my head in the clouds. We do need to show more love. Thank you my friend
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25th Sep 2018 00:00am