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Tripping
Used to be a time
Window pane
Blotter
Orange sunshine
Purple haze
Fast forward
Just a flight of stairs
Banana peel on the sidewalk
Not so romantic
Real life
You've got to laugh
To keep from crying
Window pane
Blotter
Orange sunshine
Purple haze
Fast forward
Just a flight of stairs
Banana peel on the sidewalk
Not so romantic
Real life
You've got to laugh
To keep from crying
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Re. Tripping
23rd Sep 2018 11:10pm
LOVE this one! I have no personal experience with the subject, but the visual is fantastic. And life is just full of those damn banana peels. Truth.
I forgot how to laugh for a while this week, but things are looking up and this one sure gave me a smile. Thanks.
I forgot how to laugh for a while this week, but things are looking up and this one sure gave me a smile. Thanks.
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Re. Tripping
The fun part about writing poems and matching visuals is how they partner with each other. Which came first the chicken or the egg ?? Matters not
I truly appreciate your comment. Last week sucked and hoping for better days for both of us .... !!!
Thank you for the RL add ...
I truly appreciate your comment. Last week sucked and hoping for better days for both of us .... !!!
Thank you for the RL add ...
Re. Tripping
23rd Sep 2018 11:16pm
Psychedelic ... I saw a banana peal on my job this morning ... no ... I did not slip on it ... thank you ... bravo Stubbles ...
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23rd Sep 2018 11:19pm
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23rd Sep 2018 11:24pm
Yea ... I did ... held it between my thumb and forefinger ... like hazardous waste of something ... till I found the next trash can ... floaty indeed ...
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23rd Sep 2018 11:28pm
There's nothing pleasant about a banana peel , on the street or after peeling. Slimy stuff indeed ....
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23rd Sep 2018 11:28pm
But not all slimy stuff is unpleasant ... take oysters for instance ...
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23rd Sep 2018 11:32pm
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23rd Sep 2018 11:49pm
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Anonymous
24th Sep 2018 00:19am
Boss.. Grateful Dead like..
Dave
Dave
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Re. Tripping
24th Sep 2018 00:31am
Re. Tripping
24th Sep 2018 8:27am
LSD...tried it twice...first trip was a bad one...walking around canals at
night...somebody came towards me...turned into a bike and disappeared...
Second trip was much better...I took it in a cathedral...so there was a
religious element to it...time made no sense...felt like my brain had been
scrubbed clean.
Dark Sun.
night...somebody came towards me...turned into a bike and disappeared...
Second trip was much better...I took it in a cathedral...so there was a
religious element to it...time made no sense...felt like my brain had been
scrubbed clean.
Dark Sun.
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Re. Tripping
24th Sep 2018 12:08pm
Those days are long gone for me but I remember the colors and when I finished this painting , this was my recollection....
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26th Sep 2018 3:18am
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26th Sep 2018 3:20am