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Haiku #8... essence
sunshine filtered through
sheltering trees...
shadows on walls
sheltering trees...
shadows on walls
Published 20th Sep 2018
| Edited 13th May 2019
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20th Sep 2018 6:56pm
21st Sep 2018 5:41pm
20th Sep 2018 7:43pm
20th Sep 2018 10:07pm
pigeons in a tree
unsuspecting innocence -
Ely's cat lurking
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Sorry, but the assist was too good to let go unused. ;-)
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unsuspecting innocence -
Ely's cat lurking
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Sorry, but the assist was too good to let go unused. ;-)
Like!
Giggle... Snort! nice job pie... I like. Ely
It's nice to have inspired a poem... and Pearly has become your fan, now and wants to know if you are going to write more about her.
It's nice to have inspired a poem... and Pearly has become your fan, now and wants to know if you are going to write more about her.
22nd Sep 2018 00:43am
Love the imagery. One of my favorite things is to watch shadows through the trees.
Personally, I don't think you need through or leaves!
Personally, I don't think you need through or leaves!
22nd Sep 2018 5:10am
I see what you're saying AVA... you are, of course, quite right
however... since I am attached to the music and rythm of the poetry as well as the brevity and form.... I will have to contemplate this. TTYL
Thanks for your input... Ely
however... since I am attached to the music and rythm of the poetry as well as the brevity and form.... I will have to contemplate this. TTYL
Thanks for your input... Ely
