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is this me?
I feel like my life is worthless
I cant stand loud noise
I get extremely angry an loose myself
I could possibly hurt someone I love
I love St. Philips but does it love me?
I try my hardest but do they see it?
Does everyone only notice the bad things?
Am I really as bad as what they say?
I don’t know who I am anymore
do you…?
I cant stand loud noise
I get extremely angry an loose myself
I could possibly hurt someone I love
I love St. Philips but does it love me?
I try my hardest but do they see it?
Does everyone only notice the bad things?
Am I really as bad as what they say?
I don’t know who I am anymore
do you…?
Published 31st Oct 2011
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Anonymous
5th Nov 2011 11:38am
piece Tashi, it took me to this dark room and that makes it a good write.
On the last line I dont think you need ...? I would go with one of the two...
do you...
or
do you?
But its nicely written.
On the last line I dont think you need ...? I would go with one of the two...
do you...
or
do you?
But its nicely written.
7th Nov 2011 5:03am
19th Dec 2011 3:05pm
tashi you know your poem took me back to the days when i christ was my god and i went to church this is how i felt these taughts went through my mind tashi you pretty is always so brutal and epic.
