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blue freedom
tears of the dawn caress my face
an awakening...
as the heaven's eyes ease open
seeing its child in the mist
forlorn in her journey
the Goddess stirs memories
guiding rays of glimmer
to light the night
little supernovas of hope
are sent by the mother
I will find my proper place
inside the vast universe
the supernatural my cover
it has always been
the voices stir inside me
they are finally at peace...
vices of destruction kept me chained
I turn and look behind me knowing...
they were stepping stones on my path
the only way for me...
freedom from the pain...
a vulnerable woman emerged
gentle and kind...
easy is the day who saw me
dusky blues, night shaded hues
takes me in their arms...
be on your way...
the winds of fate will guide you
pick up your pen and write...
this is your road up and out
people who need to...will hear you...
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Re. blue freedom
19th Sep 2018 4:59am
conjuring the muse? or the muse conjuring you? in either case a pleasant diversion Brenda...
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Re: Re. blue freedom
19th Sep 2018 5:01am
thank you dearest Lawrence I think she is calling on me tonight ✨
I was very restless tonight while resting she wanted me to write perhaps to no one other than me...
love Brenda
I was very restless tonight while resting she wanted me to write perhaps to no one other than me...
love Brenda
Re. blue freedom
19th Sep 2018 12:20pm
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23rd Sep 2018 3:24pm
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Re: Re. blue freedom
23rd Sep 2018 3:24pm
Re. blue freedom
Anonymous
19th Sep 2018 2:08pm
There is an ear tuned to every voice, lovely Dark Angel. Always speak your truth on your journey. Especially the rockiest sections. I love you
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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Re: Re. blue freedom
23rd Sep 2018 3:22pm
thank you beautiful Willow for the support and forgive me for not returning the love for a little while... during my recovery 🌹
I'll be myself soon...
I love you...
Brenda
I'll be myself soon...
I love you...
Brenda
Re: Re. blue freedom
23rd Sep 2018 3:22pm
Re. blue freedom
Anonymous
19th Sep 2018 3:48pm
My God! you write beautifully, my friend!! Do you think I could just move inside of your head, and live in the beautiful imagery stored there? Thank you! What's the rent? LOL!
'freedom from the pain...
a vulnerable woman emerged
gentle and kind...'
That is truth! A beautiful, kind woman. Since the first day I met you on here, you've been so kind!
And we do need you, so...
Thanks for the wonderful writing!
Matthew.
'freedom from the pain...
a vulnerable woman emerged
gentle and kind...'
That is truth! A beautiful, kind woman. Since the first day I met you on here, you've been so kind!
And we do need you, so...
Thanks for the wonderful writing!
Matthew.
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Re: Re. blue freedom
23rd Sep 2018 3:23pm
thank you graciously dearest Matthew beautiful soul...you're too kind to me 🌹
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re: Re. blue freedom
Anonymous
23rd Sep 2018 8:37pm
Never could I be too kind to you, you're my little angel, and I can't thank you enough!
❤️❤️❤️,
Matthew.
❤️❤️❤️,
Matthew.
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Re. blue freedom
19th Sep 2018 5:33pm
You will find your place...I believe you might have already just aren't sure about it.
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Re: Re. blue freedom
23rd Sep 2018 3:25pm
thank you dearest Tim I'm finding my way with the beautiful help of your poets 😊
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. blue freedom
19th Sep 2018 7:03pm
"The supernatural my cover." I've always believed this of you Brenda, and it's reflected in your writes. This one is pure magic.
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23rd Sep 2018 3:26pm
Re. blue freedom
19th Sep 2018 8:52pm
Like the idea of our vices from the past being stepping stones to who we are today, lovely image it casts of life's struggles.
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Re: Re. blue freedom
23rd Sep 2018 3:27pm
thank you dearest RJM for liking those lines I was unsure people would understand that sometimes are paths stepping stones go through the fire 💕
I deeply appreciate your vision of this write...
love Brenda
I deeply appreciate your vision of this write...
love Brenda
Re. blue freedom
19th Sep 2018 10:36pm
"pick up your pen and write... " the only answer - inspiration comes when it finds you at your desk
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Re: Re. blue freedom
23rd Sep 2018 3:28pm
thank you dearest Josh yes it is the only answer for us poets and writers ✨
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. blue freedom
Anonymous
20th Sep 2018 2:13am
Brenda.. fucking love this.. so many layers, i always feel your ink.. so honored that you share with me.. in my list it goes.. love you my sister..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. blue freedom
23rd Sep 2018 3:29pm
thank you dearest Dave my brother for feeling me so deeply 💕
I love you...
Brenda
I love you...
Brenda
Re. blue freedom
20th Sep 2018 4:09am
I did need to read this tonight. This is gentle yet roars. You make lyrical introspection into your own art. And what a fabulous beauty of darkness and emergence you've conjured here. You really worked your black magic on me tonight. And the effect is as cathartic as it is enlightening. ;-)
XOXOXO
John
XOXOXO
John
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Re: Re. blue freedom
23rd Sep 2018 3:30pm
thank you dearest John you really touched my heart with your comment I read it right away but was struggling with personal demons and couldn't answer forgive me 💕
I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda
I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda
Re: Re. blue freedom
23rd Sep 2018 11:01pm
Knowing you through your words enriches my life, my friend. My gratitude to runs deep, very deep. You are an extraordinary poet whom I am honored to know.
Love,
John
Love,
John
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23rd Sep 2018 11:08pm
Re. blue freedom
20th Sep 2018 9:36am
Great to see you doing what you do best...beautiful...I hear you crim...
Dark Sun
Dark Sun
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23rd Sep 2018 3:31pm
Re. blue freedom
24th Oct 2018 6:28pm
It's interesting how your writing doesn't deviate much in terms of theme, voice, tone and style as well. Nice re-claiming piece.
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Re: Re. blue freedom
24th Oct 2018 6:32pm
thank you beautiful Nari there is an ever guiding presence I feel in my life one for the negative and you will find that too and one for the positive...
I deeply appreciate the love on my writes...
love Brenda 💕
I deeply appreciate the love on my writes...
love Brenda 💕