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Lives
(Written by daughter : Novia 9 yrs)
Lives are good
Lives are bad
Lives are happy
Lives are sad
Life can be sweet
Life can be dark
Life is complete
No matter where you are
Lives are warm
Lives are cold
Lives are born
Lives are bold
Life is lies
Life is blue skies
Life is tragic
And full of magic
Lives are good
Lives are bad
Lives are happy
Lives are sad
Life can be sweet
Life can be dark
Life is complete
No matter where you are
Lives are warm
Lives are cold
Lives are born
Lives are bold
Life is lies
Life is blue skies
Life is tragic
And full of magic
Published 14th Sep 2018
Author's Note
Please comment for Novia
Can't contain myself not to brag.
The last verse gets me and I wonder if she even knows the depth of it.
Can't contain myself not to brag.
The last verse gets me and I wonder if she even knows the depth of it.
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14th Sep 2018 2:12am
That’s a ton of insight from a 9 year old, very balanced and poignant. Excellent work! Encourage this talent!
14th Sep 2018 2:13am
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Anonymous
14th Sep 2018 4:32am
Novia(beautiful name), that is fantastic! Smart, and insightful, and beautifully written!
I'm going to need to see some ID, because I don't believe you're nine!
Great job!
Great job, mom, also!
Matthew.
I'm going to need to see some ID, because I don't believe you're nine!
Great job!
Great job, mom, also!
Matthew.
14th Sep 2018 4:38am
14th Sep 2018 1:43pm
You won me over with that ending! Nothing better than magic! You did good, never stop writing it does amazing things for not only yourself but others around you
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15th Sep 2018 1:17am
Hellaciously good. Girl has more depth than i have in my pinky, and I’m way way older.
15th Sep 2018 1:19am
