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9/11
A solemn day
Every year around late August
I feel the day approaching as summer fades
Then last night I turned to my wife
Just said "9/11"
Eyes cast down
There's nothing to say
I think about the bells being rung
I think about all those babies who are grown now
I think about where I was that day
The sky brilliant blue turning to ash
Fear gripping me
Silence in a city that never is quiet
I live here, I never left
Those years that followed
The terror alerts and that uneasy feeling
We made it through with courage and something else
Humanity amongst the haters
We breathe another day awash in freedom
Every year around late August
I feel the day approaching as summer fades
Then last night I turned to my wife
Just said "9/11"
Eyes cast down
There's nothing to say
I think about the bells being rung
I think about all those babies who are grown now
I think about where I was that day
The sky brilliant blue turning to ash
Fear gripping me
Silence in a city that never is quiet
I live here, I never left
Those years that followed
The terror alerts and that uneasy feeling
We made it through with courage and something else
Humanity amongst the haters
We breathe another day awash in freedom
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Re. 9/11
11th Sep 2018 2:29pm
I remember that night, looking up to the sky and not seeing a thing in sight wondering about the future of the world. There were a lot of babies made that night.
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Re. 9/11
11th Sep 2018 2:30pm
dearest Poet a very solemn day lest we forget
that day changed America for good
how much more it affected you at ground zero...
I remember that day well
waking to the second plane crashing live on tv...
we will never forget it...
one of our most tragic days in history...
in memorial to all that died...
this is a powerful write...
love Brenda
that day changed America for good
how much more it affected you at ground zero...
I remember that day well
waking to the second plane crashing live on tv...
we will never forget it...
one of our most tragic days in history...
in memorial to all that died...
this is a powerful write...
love Brenda
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Re: Re. 9/11
11th Sep 2018 2:33pm
There is an eerie calm from where I sit
As the day goes on it will ramp up
Gives me chills thinking about it
Thx for reading and your thoughtful comment
As the day goes on it will ramp up
Gives me chills thinking about it
Thx for reading and your thoughtful comment
Re. 9/11
11th Sep 2018 2:31pm
Indeed there were ....
It always hits me the same way every year, right between the eyes
It always hits me the same way every year, right between the eyes
Re. 9/11
11th Sep 2018 2:33pm
To be honest with you
I knew it was coming around but I'd forgotten it was today till you reminded me by way of this poignant piece
Indeed I was unfortunate enough to watch it unfold on the news as it happened
Incredible even now that it actually happened
Beyond sad
Humans and their destructive ways towards other humans because of beliefs
I knew it was coming around but I'd forgotten it was today till you reminded me by way of this poignant piece
Indeed I was unfortunate enough to watch it unfold on the news as it happened
Incredible even now that it actually happened
Beyond sad
Humans and their destructive ways towards other humans because of beliefs
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Re: Re. 9/11
11th Sep 2018 2:35pm
Re: Re. 9/11
11th Sep 2018 2:36pm
Yeah feel kinda stupid that I'd forgotten
But thankyou for making me spare a thought to those now not with us
xx
But thankyou for making me spare a thought to those now not with us
xx
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Re: Re. 9/11
11th Sep 2018 2:50pm
Re. 9/11
11th Sep 2018 7:53pm
My silhouette is me on the 110th floor of the World Trade Centre...
9/11 still feels like yesterday...
Dark Sun.
9/11 still feels like yesterday...
Dark Sun.
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Re: Re. 9/11
11th Sep 2018 8:15pm
Re. 9/11
8th May 2021 2:13pm
I CAME FROM SCHOOL AND SAW ON CNN WHAT WAS HAPPENING. ONE OF THE SADDEST DAYS OF MY LIFE AS KID WATCHING PEOPLE JUMP. I CRIED AND CRIED AND CRIED. I WAS ELEVEN AND I CRIED COZ I WANTED GOD TO HEAR ME. I WILL NEVER FORGET THAT DAY. NEVER.
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Re: Re. 9/11
8th May 2021 2:19pm
I WAS 48 ON THAT DAY
68 NOW
OLD DOG WITH A FEW NEW TRICKS
I WAS WORKING AN EARLY CLASS AT MY WIFES DANCE STUDIO WHEN THE HORROR UNFOLDED. TOO MUCH WENT DOWN THAT DAY...
68 NOW
OLD DOG WITH A FEW NEW TRICKS
I WAS WORKING AN EARLY CLASS AT MY WIFES DANCE STUDIO WHEN THE HORROR UNFOLDED. TOO MUCH WENT DOWN THAT DAY...
Re. 9/11
8th May 2021 2:25pm
I AM SORRY. IT WAS A DARK DAY. NAMIBIANS WERE CRYING WITH AMERICANS THAT DAY.
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Re: Re. 9/11
8th May 2021 2:35pm