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A Morning Promenade
Dreams made for languid moods, upon the way
To wakefulness on Sunday, tell one sleep
Despises a chill morning; I display
Reluctance to perform, and this can keep
Him quite on edge until, stroking my hair,
He whispers words of warning; woe betide
Me if delay means ragged needs must share
Harsh fantasies with lost dreams; my mind's eye
Will be shattered by fingers interlocked
In strands of dark; he'll cause my scalp to ache,
Until I follow him where he's hard-cocked,
Ready for mouth to open - let him take
His morning promenade upon my tongue,
So languid moods are over 'til he's done.
To wakefulness on Sunday, tell one sleep
Despises a chill morning; I display
Reluctance to perform, and this can keep
Him quite on edge until, stroking my hair,
He whispers words of warning; woe betide
Me if delay means ragged needs must share
Harsh fantasies with lost dreams; my mind's eye
Will be shattered by fingers interlocked
In strands of dark; he'll cause my scalp to ache,
Until I follow him where he's hard-cocked,
Ready for mouth to open - let him take
His morning promenade upon my tongue,
So languid moods are over 'til he's done.
Published 9th Sep 2018
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9th Sep 2018 2:00pm
Maybe that would be a better title for the piece - smiles - yes - I change it.
9th Sep 2018 4:27pm
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9th Sep 2018 6:28pm
I think it works as I tend to avoid surgery and drugs in poems and play with themes of nature - smiles
9th Sep 2018 4:39pm
mistress of sonnet has sung again...you do it so well...always a pleasure to imagine you reciting...
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9th Sep 2018 6:40pm
Morning promenade...sounds like a stroll you would never forget...
Great exercise for your tongue...
Dark Sun
Great exercise for your tongue...
Dark Sun
