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Fuck Holes
Why don't you just cut me open
Rip me in half
Only bones and blood and gore
Nothing more
Tear off my tits
Big holes to my pits
And just your luck
Another hole to fuck
Then add to my disgrace
Go ahead and fuck my face
Fuck my eyes and nose and brain
Fuck away my endless pain
Fuck me standing, running, walking
Fuck my mouth to stop my talking
Fuck me, fuck me, head to toe
Fuck it all, is all I know
Rip me in half
Only bones and blood and gore
Nothing more
Tear off my tits
Big holes to my pits
And just your luck
Another hole to fuck
Then add to my disgrace
Go ahead and fuck my face
Fuck my eyes and nose and brain
Fuck away my endless pain
Fuck me standing, running, walking
Fuck my mouth to stop my talking
Fuck me, fuck me, head to toe
Fuck it all, is all I know
Published 6th Sep 2018
Author's Note
This is my way of saying I need so much more than physical attention. And the anger I feel at being treated like a body and not a mind, heart, soul
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6th Sep 2018 3:28am
Dumb as this may sound coming from a guy, I actually DO understand this from personal experience. And that’s especially when it’s needed to spout off
6th Sep 2018 3:31am
Not all guys are nice guys.
And not all women are stupid whores.
Umm. Can I say that without offending anyone?
Fuck it, if you're easily offended, DON'T read my post. Lol
And not all women are stupid whores.
Umm. Can I say that without offending anyone?
Fuck it, if you're easily offended, DON'T read my post. Lol
6th Sep 2018 3:32am
Lol I’d think the title itself would be a warning to the easily offended. Then again, that’s assuming attention and logic...
6th Sep 2018 3:39am
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6th Sep 2018 3:38am
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6th Sep 2018 3:57am
I've never personally known a woman who purposely put on weight. Seems to me it happens because their self image is so shattered by how they are treated that they no longer care about themselves and then the weight comes along which makes them feel worse.
Now I'm not expert on this. Just giving a woman's perspective here.
I could be totally wrong.
Thanks for the input.
Now I'm not expert on this. Just giving a woman's perspective here.
I could be totally wrong.
Thanks for the input.
Anonymous
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6th Sep 2018 3:58am
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6th Sep 2018 4:00am
Thanks I wasn't trying to be condescending or anything like that but almost every woman is sensitive about their weight and I don't see someone sabotaging themselves in spite of someone else.
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6th Sep 2018 4:04am
Sounds like she had a lot of confidence in herself and didn't care what ppl thought. Go girl!
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6th Sep 2018 4:11am
Man you're so wrong on so many levels but I don't have my notes ready to teach my 'what makes a woman tick' class so guess you'll have to wait for it on paperback.
Jk.
I'm a smartass. Don't take me seriously!
Jk.
I'm a smartass. Don't take me seriously!
Anonymous
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6th Sep 2018 4:16am
Ok, I'll let you go with a warning. Lol
I wouldn't scold my friends. Especially if they enjoy what I've written.
I wouldn't scold my friends. Especially if they enjoy what I've written.
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6th Sep 2018 4:27am
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Anonymous
6th Sep 2018 4:04am
Medinda! Wow! You're sooo much more than that! Your wonderful spirit and mind are your finest attributes, that I can tell, and I've only known you briefly. You're beautiful inside(except that spleen is a little squiggly looking. Kidding). You're awesome. Matthew.
Now, no more outbursts like that.😊
Now, no more outbursts like that.😊
6th Sep 2018 4:07am
*stuttering in shock*
That you told me what to do in my own post..
Bad Matthew..bad. Lol
I will have verbal diarrhea whenever i so choose.
: p
That you told me what to do in my own post..
Bad Matthew..bad. Lol
I will have verbal diarrhea whenever i so choose.
: p
6th Sep 2018 4:39am
6th Sep 2018 6:14am
What a fuckin poem....I am happy during all sex... it is sometimes strange to think a man would not have a smile to have a woman...Perhaps I am different
bravo poetess
Jeff
bravo poetess
Jeff
6th Sep 2018 6:56am
That was a fucking awesome read! I mean that in the kindest and sincerest of ways. Something totally relatable
6th Sep 2018 3:57pm
6th Sep 2018 5:01pm
Thank you dear, I figured the ladies would get it. At least a few unfortunate ones.
6th Sep 2018 8:41pm
6th Sep 2018 10:27pm
He need to treat you like a diamond, with so much love
That his emotional feelings, will override the nut,
Life has it's up's and down's like a whores draws
But hold out on the goodies, before giving up the pussy walls.
That his emotional feelings, will override the nut,
Life has it's up's and down's like a whores draws
But hold out on the goodies, before giving up the pussy walls.
6th Sep 2018 10:39pm
That's true indeed and thank you. This is something I wrote many years ago so...
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6th Sep 2018 10:40pm
7th Sep 2018 3:19am
