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DROWNED
And in the morning
We were still
Glued together
Dry husks
Who had sucked
Every drop
Of moisture
From each other
Would the rains
Come again?
I felt for the answer
Before you swept me away
In your flash flood
I drown this way
A good death
We were still
Glued together
Dry husks
Who had sucked
Every drop
Of moisture
From each other
Would the rains
Come again?
I felt for the answer
Before you swept me away
In your flash flood
I drown this way
A good death
Published 4th Sep 2018
Author's Note
This was originally two separate poems but I like it now as one.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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4th Sep 2018 10:06pm
We combine also seems like we're writing one without knowing. This piece is nice because you show a way of saying it without saying it.
4th Sep 2018 10:50pm
4th Sep 2018 11:10pm
4th Sep 2018 11:14pm
Thank you. The hilarious thing is that this was a composite of two poems that came about through a relationship that was entirely online between me and another writer of erotic poetry. So yeah, I agree, it sounds like a wonderful night ;-)
4th Sep 2018 11:17pm
4th Sep 2018 11:19pm
Thank you again, but they were both mine. I wouldn't dream of publishing hers without permission. I will say that she has brought me better sex through poetry than others have through their bodies.
Anonymous
15th Oct 2018 8:31pm
Oh what a wonderful night it must have been!
15th Oct 2018 8:37pm
Anonymous
15th Oct 2018 8:39pm
I think I need a little reminder.
15th Oct 2018 8:43pm
