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In the Time of Fires
The three Furies never kept me guessing;
The seasons, whither, when or why.
Every year, the protocols of dressing:
Always the same place, the same time.
The almanac predictions you’d swear by,
The ice age that nobody felt.
We knew the sun had gone cold in the sky,
Then one day things started to melt.
And although the seas rose ever higher,
The floods and the runoffs, but worse.
One day came an ominous town cryer
Who speaks of a harbinger thirst.
To write the unspoken is biblical,
For it’s all scribed in the past tense.
Return of the plagues started long ago;
I’ve no words to say in defense.
The three Furies never kept me guessing;
The seasons, whither, when or why.
Nothing compares to betrayal’s blessing
When faced with white ash from on high.
The time of fires, the time of widows,
Brings first responders to their knees.
A host of arches of stained glass windows
That once was a forest of trees.
Comes a relay of planes with their airdrops,
This time it’s the difference they make.
Hardly seen as they look for the hotspots,
Consumes everything in their wake.
In the distant red smoke-filled horizon,
The empty frames on empty sites.
A bright flare up, they seem on an island;
It looks like will be a long night.
The time of fires, the time of ruin
That now has a life unending.
Of an ember that sparks as it blew in
From another pyre ascending.
#ArthurRimbaud
The seasons, whither, when or why.
Every year, the protocols of dressing:
Always the same place, the same time.
The almanac predictions you’d swear by,
The ice age that nobody felt.
We knew the sun had gone cold in the sky,
Then one day things started to melt.
And although the seas rose ever higher,
The floods and the runoffs, but worse.
One day came an ominous town cryer
Who speaks of a harbinger thirst.
To write the unspoken is biblical,
For it’s all scribed in the past tense.
Return of the plagues started long ago;
I’ve no words to say in defense.
The three Furies never kept me guessing;
The seasons, whither, when or why.
Nothing compares to betrayal’s blessing
When faced with white ash from on high.
The time of fires, the time of widows,
Brings first responders to their knees.
A host of arches of stained glass windows
That once was a forest of trees.
Comes a relay of planes with their airdrops,
This time it’s the difference they make.
Hardly seen as they look for the hotspots,
Consumes everything in their wake.
In the distant red smoke-filled horizon,
The empty frames on empty sites.
A bright flare up, they seem on an island;
It looks like will be a long night.
The time of fires, the time of ruin
That now has a life unending.
Of an ember that sparks as it blew in
From another pyre ascending.
#ArthurRimbaud
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 1st Sep 2018
| Edited 2nd Sep 2018
Author's Note
THE ERINYES (Furies) were three goddesses of vengeance and retribution who punished men for crimes against the natural order.
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Re. In the Time of Fires
1st Sep 2018 6:18pm
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1st Sep 2018 7:15pm
Re. In the Time of Fires
1st Sep 2018 6:19pm
Brilliant poem, Jade! It reminded me of the tragedy that recently happened in Greece with the wild fires and the poor people who held onto each other as they burnt to death. Nature is a force to be reckoned with, and I certainly don't want to be on her shit list, nor of the Furies.
Well done!
Well done!
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Thank you so very much, dear brightest illume of the goddess...
The way, over time, the fire seasons have shifted... from setting your sundial by their arrival & passing away annually, is no longer possible. It’s year-round & global, inflicting untold destruction & death. Nature’s reaction is normal, while the excelleration of climate change by mankind is not.
You’ve got the right idea, dearest.
🌜🐅
The way, over time, the fire seasons have shifted... from setting your sundial by their arrival & passing away annually, is no longer possible. It’s year-round & global, inflicting untold destruction & death. Nature’s reaction is normal, while the excelleration of climate change by mankind is not.
You’ve got the right idea, dearest.
🌜🐅
Re. In the Time of Fires
1st Sep 2018 6:24pm
... add in the four horses of the apocalypse and we're in for a rough ride.
"The time of fires, the time of widows, " great but painful line.
"The time of fires, the time of widows, " great but painful line.
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2nd Sep 2018 11:09am
Re. In the Time of Fires
1st Sep 2018 7:04pm
work. Jadie...
of art.
speechless.
the whole piece, sheer skill
talent, poetry
on display.
My RL is sadly full. know what's next.
of art.
speechless.
the whole piece, sheer skill
talent, poetry
on display.
My RL is sadly full. know what's next.
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Re: Re. In the Time of Fires
2nd Sep 2018 12:40pm
Thank you beyond thank you, my cold friend..., what honor you gift a humble poet.
Re: Re. In the Time of Fires
5th Sep 2018 12:48pm
Oh! Dear cold friend, thank you so very much for the honor of place on your Reading List.
Re: Re. In the Time of Fires
5th Sep 2018 12:50pm
Waited 4 days...but the RL wouldn't increase...so had to make room...but tell you what this is worth every letter of it! My pleasure!
:-)
:-)
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1st Sep 2018 8:00pm
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Re: Re. In the Time of Fires
Thank you, Jarlath, for your spirit & kindness, which means a lot.
And I’m glad you found us.
And I’m glad you found us.
Re. In the Time of Fires
1st Sep 2018 8:43pm
I love the mix of mythology and reality, the references to fire a blend of current event, dork portent, and biblical crisis. If I had a critique, it would only be that this feels almost a summary for a larger story or poem that you have in you to tell; consider an expansion or a deeper dive. I could almost feel characters both mortal and cosmic hidden in this
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3rd Sep 2018 4:23am
My gracious thanks, Taurus.
I will expound on a reply to you in a while. I want to do you justice, and must eat & rest first. I’ll be back.
I will expound on a reply to you in a while. I want to do you justice, and must eat & rest first. I’ll be back.
Re: Re. In the Time of Fires
3rd Sep 2018 12:43pm
Dear poet Taurus, thank you for your patience, it’s very decent of you.
After multiple readings, I connect each time with your words. I’ve been a writer/ poet for years, and have often had such feelings of something beyond a poem once it’s done. My response is coming to me as I type it here. I think it’s because I’m seeking the final act/thought of certain writes and decide to let each reader go their own depth. I always hope they’ll get back to me (as you & others have done here on this thread). I always learn from my readers, those who let me know. So many don’t understand that it’s a give & take proposition: learning from each other.
I hope my words will help.
After multiple readings, I connect each time with your words. I’ve been a writer/ poet for years, and have often had such feelings of something beyond a poem once it’s done. My response is coming to me as I type it here. I think it’s because I’m seeking the final act/thought of certain writes and decide to let each reader go their own depth. I always hope they’ll get back to me (as you & others have done here on this thread). I always learn from my readers, those who let me know. So many don’t understand that it’s a give & take proposition: learning from each other.
I hope my words will help.
Re: Re. In the Time of Fires
3rd Sep 2018 4:44pm
Thanks for taking the time to build s robust response, you didn’t have to. It’s funny, you talk about expansion thoughts after the fact...there are a couple of pieces I’ve posted here that have sat on my computer, my phone, or a notebook for well over a year, and as I moved to post them, the second look in the process prompted me to edit and add.
I’ve had crazy ideas on how to use poetry for story work, or *as* story work; sounds like you’re headed the same way. Share with us what you develop; your fellow poets are hungry ;)
I’ve had crazy ideas on how to use poetry for story work, or *as* story work; sounds like you’re headed the same way. Share with us what you develop; your fellow poets are hungry ;)
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Re: Re. In the Time of Fires
3rd Sep 2018 4:44pm
Thanks for taking the time to build s robust response, you didn’t have to. It’s funny, you talk about expansion thoughts after the fact...there are a couple of pieces I’ve posted here that have sat on my computer, my phone, or a notebook for well over a year, and as I moved to post them, the second look in the process prompted me to edit and add.
I’ve had crazy ideas on how to use poetry for story work, or *as* story work; sounds like you’re headed the same way. Share with us what you develop; your fellow poets are hungry ;)
I’ve had crazy ideas on how to use poetry for story work, or *as* story work; sounds like you’re headed the same way. Share with us what you develop; your fellow poets are hungry ;)
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Re: Re. In the Time of Fires
Well now this you’ve said I can answer quickly:
This very poem you’ve been commenting on I expanded immediately once I thought it was finished, because more came to me.
You’re brand new to the site, and therefore, to my work. If I’ve left you insatiable, I invite you to delve into the bounty that is my collection. It’s eclectic, and shows a natural progression of how my writing has been evolving just in the past three years. To support my writing is to get to know me, not just the crafter of words, but everything that has made the passion to write part of my very soul.
This very poem you’ve been commenting on I expanded immediately once I thought it was finished, because more came to me.
You’re brand new to the site, and therefore, to my work. If I’ve left you insatiable, I invite you to delve into the bounty that is my collection. It’s eclectic, and shows a natural progression of how my writing has been evolving just in the past three years. To support my writing is to get to know me, not just the crafter of words, but everything that has made the passion to write part of my very soul.
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3rd Sep 2018 5:10pm
I see your challenge and accept it :D
The same can be said of my work; you’re invite to tour my mind, for what it’s worth anyway lol
The same can be said of my work; you’re invite to tour my mind, for what it’s worth anyway lol
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3rd Sep 2018 5:16pm
Re. In the Time of Fires
Anonymous
1st Sep 2018 9:53pm
Superb write Jade! The furies were of celtic legend. Very close to my heart. Rob
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Re: Re. In the Time of Fires
2nd Sep 2018 12:05pm
Thank you for feeling my piece, Rob, and for such support. And I too have always felt close to the mythological legends.
Re. In the Time of Fires
1st Sep 2018 10:59pm
Perfect for this time of fires having raised havoc in California. Introducing the mythological elements is brilliant. Love it, Jade!
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2nd Sep 2018 12:11pm
Ah my crowfly friend, it’s wonderful to have you stop by for a read. With us both so close in proximity, we’re able to experience the impact of the wildfires that have raged in every direction on the compass.., very surreal while more than real.
Take care - we’ll talk soon.
Take care - we’ll talk soon.
Re. In the Time of Fires
2nd Sep 2018 3:25pm
this is amazing! How well this is being received... I love the imagery and the message.
Brilliant!
Thomas X. Cat
Brilliant!
Thomas X. Cat
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Re: Re. In the Time of Fires
3rd Sep 2018 4:20am
Thank you, Thomas X, for the honor of your Trilogy, and for your response on how my poem impacted you. I thought often of you through the night as I composed this poem because of what you went through in the huge wildfire conflagration in Santa Rosa.
Tiger Q
Tiger Q
Re. In the Time of Fires
2nd Sep 2018 7:03pm
Such apocalyptic imagery...unfortunately, I fear that climate change is now irreversible.
Dark Sun.
Dark Sun.
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Thank you, Dark Sun, I appreciate your coming in to read and express. And yes, that might be, as long as mankind abuses the privileges of Mother Earth. If it ends tomorrow, she’ll recover from the damages in short order.
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