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Wisps of Smoke (from a friendly fire) 🔥
Hallelujah
thy power never fails
and behold, he hath made you anew
you're beautiful......I celebrate you
Memories of your lofty memoirs,
your lustfully elusive prose
my mind assumes the provocative
you're so evocative
( the shape of beautifully sexy things to cum.....I'm sure )
Chocolate Drops and Ice Cream
melting like the rain
on a hot tin roof
my thoughts sounding somewhat aloof?
May I tell you the truth
Damn, I want you boo....
...long legged, toned and brown
pointed toward the sky
spread open wide as if to welcome the sun
I rake my fingers down the inside
of your soft, voluptuous thighs
sensual tingling begins
and mother nature's rains start to pour
pussy lips engage in passionate kisses
Chocolick whispers “more”
( stroking my cock until it's spent and sore )
dreamy portraits of
your haunches round
this mahogany king
desires to ride your body
into the ground...until our
pleasures slowly subside,
creamy intimacies explode
deeply...
….within the fragrant scent born of our friendly fire
Published 23rd Aug 2018
Author's Note
for "Chocolate Drop" who is made whole once again. "Lust is a captive animal, rapture' d and made free ....ahh, the beauty of her danger loosed....."
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23rd Aug 2018 8:16pm
Your title is apparently incomplete.
Favourite lines (for rhyme):
my mind assumes the provocative
you're so evocative
Favourite lines (for rhyme):
my mind assumes the provocative
you're so evocative
24th Aug 2018 5:52am
Mr. M,
I must say.......you always seem to amaze me! Your penmanship is so sensual, I felt every touch, stroke and wetness of your spilled ink. It took me back down memory lane, except you were the one who stumbled over a photograph.😍
I must say.......you always seem to amaze me! Your penmanship is so sensual, I felt every touch, stroke and wetness of your spilled ink. It took me back down memory lane, except you were the one who stumbled over a photograph.😍
25th Aug 2018 00:03am
Dig this piece Mr. M, and that graphic is fire, had to look at it a couple of times.......lol. I like your style, brother I'll be checkin in to see what you drop next.
7th Sep 2018 6:07pm
To us the piece which is tight just seems to merge with the graphics, nice work
