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Making Room
Its not the space we take on this earth
but, rather
the space we make for others
that matters most
Published 22nd Aug 2018
Author's Note
"considering how long I've been taking up space... "
The inspiration for this, courtesy of Ely's comment on her poem "If I Could...???"
**Taken while she wasn't lookin'**
The inspiration for this, courtesy of Ely's comment on her poem "If I Could...???"
**Taken while she wasn't lookin'**
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22nd Aug 2018 5:33pm
Oh, well said, Amorous... and even if
I wasn't lookin'...
I'm happy that you got it cookin'...
Delighted to have inspired such a lovely piece of work. Thanks for the compliment... Ely
I wasn't lookin'...
I'm happy that you got it cookin'...
Delighted to have inspired such a lovely piece of work. Thanks for the compliment... Ely
Always good to see someone not wastin' theirs.
Not just my pleasure, honor as well.
Not just my pleasure, honor as well.
22nd Aug 2018 6:07pm
22nd Aug 2018 6:14pm
The muse stopped in for a minute, on her way to who know where!
Thanks, Bob.
Thanks, Bob.
22nd Aug 2018 6:34pm
well...
wise souls know their worth
still decline it anyway
and that is wisdom in practice(if you look deep and close enough) ;-)
speechless on this bull's eye Teri!
resonates!!! deep!
wise souls know their worth
still decline it anyway
and that is wisdom in practice(if you look deep and close enough) ;-)
speechless on this bull's eye Teri!
resonates!!! deep!
23rd Aug 2018 5:54pm
Well, Ely wrote something concerning wisdom that I particularly enjoyed, and I shall paraphrase it here.
Wisdom is nothing more than retained experiences brought on by aging.
Probably the reason I appear to have some. :-)))
Thanks for the read and RL, my friend.
Wisdom is nothing more than retained experiences brought on by aging.
Probably the reason I appear to have some. :-)))
Thanks for the read and RL, my friend.
22nd Aug 2018 8:38pm
Wise words put into a perfectly poetic statement. Something to ponder on
23rd Aug 2018 5:37pm
Thank You H_E, that's my main goal in writing, getting others to ponder. Glad I accomplished some of it today.
Welcome to the Deep Under...……...
Welcome to the Deep Under...……...
23rd Aug 2018 1:52am
23rd Aug 2018 5:44pm
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23rd Aug 2018 6:01pm
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23rd Aug 2018 6:33pm
The wonderful thing about Space is its always expanding.
But, I ain't helping to move any heavy furniture! :-))
Thanks for adding me to your stops, Jariath.
But, I ain't helping to move any heavy furniture! :-))
Thanks for adding me to your stops, Jariath.
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