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Love and Hate
Love and Hate, peas in a pod.
For
no amount of words can fully describe either.
Yet
only hate can be dismissed, thrown to the wind and forgotten.
But
love, true love...…
if you have it..... well, need I try and say more.
Published 17th Aug 2018
Author's Note
Inspired by Cold_fusion's
"love poems?...barely seen any"
"love poems?...barely seen any"
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17th Aug 2018 11:29pm
19th Aug 2018 1:43am
18th Aug 2018 00:23am
🙂
Wisdom is synonymous with my Friend Admired here!
gem.
the more i dwell on the above
the more i am drawn into its depths.
poet. Teri
Wisdom is synonymous with my Friend Admired here!
gem.
the more i dwell on the above
the more i am drawn into its depths.
poet. Teri
19th Aug 2018 1:59am
The wisdom?, was nothing more than what your poem inspired by already pointing me in that direction, my friend.
I will however accept your more than kind words,
though I feel the real credit belongs to you.
Thank You, C_f, for EVERYTHING!
T
I will however accept your more than kind words,
though I feel the real credit belongs to you.
Thank You, C_f, for EVERYTHING!
T
19th Aug 2018 2:04am
Teri
you generous soul..
you shoulda played baseball
no matter the pace of the throw
you hit it outta the park...everytime
no...the Gratitudr is ours! to you!
for everything!!!
you generous soul..
you shoulda played baseball
no matter the pace of the throw
you hit it outta the park...everytime
no...the Gratitudr is ours! to you!
for everything!!!
25th Aug 2018 7:29pm
and on the same subject...one of our beloved wise souls had shed some light too..
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/236298-hardwired/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/236298-hardwired/
25th Aug 2018 9:06pm
18th Aug 2018 4:43am
19th Aug 2018 1:46am
Not so sure about the wisdom, probably
due more to repetitive trial and error.
Thank you for the kind words, Brenda
due more to repetitive trial and error.
Thank you for the kind words, Brenda
Hey lady... you couldn't have said it better...
I love you have each line well-separated from its sisters by a small, strong word...
and , to boot... you have made a fine tree...
capped with a thick coat of Love and Hate...
and a little blanket of True, true love...
draped around it's feet.
Kudos today, Amiga... Ely
I love you have each line well-separated from its sisters by a small, strong word...
and , to boot... you have made a fine tree...
capped with a thick coat of Love and Hate...
and a little blanket of True, true love...
draped around it's feet.
Kudos today, Amiga... Ely
19th Aug 2018 1:53am
To be totally honest, I hadn't even noticed the tree shape.
It took a sharp eye to point that out, and in such a poetic way,
a sharp mind as well.
Thank you for the thoughtful comment.
I'll let my blind squirrel know, when next I see it. :-)
It took a sharp eye to point that out, and in such a poetic way,
a sharp mind as well.
Thank you for the thoughtful comment.
I'll let my blind squirrel know, when next I see it. :-)
