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a beautiful mind
you have me reaching for beauty in my art
it's easy to see the darkness
open your eyes and it's there
but the light as it falls just right
on the beautiful landscape in subtle shades
takes a trained mind
an artists eye for detail
you have that my dear
I didn't quite see you fully before
my vision attuned to the bleak
couldn't recognize true beauty
when it was right in front of me
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Re: Re. a beautiful mind
21st Aug 2018 1:01pm
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21st Aug 2018 12:57pm
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Re: Re. a beautiful mind
21st Aug 2018 1:03pm
thank you dearest Todski yes I suppose you're right in that every day is a new revelation of self... i'm happy you like my softer side...
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Re. a beautiful mind
21st Aug 2018 1:59pm
Re: Re. a beautiful mind
21st Aug 2018 2:12pm
thank you beautiful Dragonfly yes opening ones eyes to the light can be painful it takes awhile to adjust to and see the beauty before you...
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Re. a beautiful mind
21st Aug 2018 4:31pm
What a gorgeous poem full of beauty and appreciation for inspiration.
It's so hard to feel inspired at times when we feel we've said all we could ever say but suddenly out of nowhere we see a spark and then we feel renewed again, this is exactly what this poem portrays, Very nicely done !
It's so hard to feel inspired at times when we feel we've said all we could ever say but suddenly out of nowhere we see a spark and then we feel renewed again, this is exactly what this poem portrays, Very nicely done !
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Re: Re. a beautiful mind
21st Aug 2018 4:36pm
thank you beautiful Layla for the beautifully uplifting comment I love your view on this write...we are ever evolving I believe sometimes devolving but I think pain gives us some perspective on what true beauty is...giving us to material to create anew with...
I deeply appreciate your thougths...
love Brenda
I deeply appreciate your thougths...
love Brenda
Re. a beautiful mind
21st Aug 2018 4:53pm
At times we need to take a step back and see all the beauty that lies around us.
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Re: Re. a beautiful mind
21st Aug 2018 5:12pm
Re. a beautiful mind
Anonymous
21st Aug 2018 6:14pm
Sometimes the most beautiful things are staring us right in the face. Just waiting to be seen...and sometimes they're oblivious to their own beauty entirely. This is an incredibly lovely write, beautiful Raven
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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Re: Re. a beautiful mind
21st Aug 2018 6:21pm
thank you beautiful Willow so often I find myself awakening to truths that for the life of me I don't understand evaded me previously...
I love you 💕
love Brenda
I love you 💕
love Brenda
Re. a beautiful mind
21st Aug 2018 11:35pm
Your vision might be attuned to the bleak but there's also a tenderness that lights much of the darkness. "A beautiful mind" is a case in point. Wonderful!
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Re: Re. a beautiful mind
22nd Aug 2018 6:43am
thank you dearest Sir Crow for seeing the tenderness underneath the dark...
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