Dark Queen~a tale of two women

I have a functional schizophrenia as well...to balance out your darker other ego...I suspect sits a sweet little heart behind loving eyes

two women are sexier than one
at least in the boudoir....opps I said too much

love
Jeff

giggles Jeff yeah I'm bipolar with psychotic episodes my darker alter has been ruling lately as I reflect on my writes I'd like to see more of my gentler side...

I appreciate your thoughts you gifted me smiles :)

love Brenda

just snuggle your heart up next to your love and see the stars in his eyes...and the sweetheart poems will flow

thank you dearest Jeff :)

you're right what a beautiful thought...

love Brenda

The woman I care for currently...lives on the other side of the world with her own life and I sit alone in my house and bed wanting nothing but to hold her...and only to be able to have her in video call...so I think of her affection constantly to compensate.. unknowingly... thus it makes my heart ache for her touch....so the poems come out in response...I am so glad you have found a home together with your man...nothing feels more hopeless than a home with no one to love inside it....thank you for your sweetness...I have been uplifted more than once by your heart in my lone space.. my dear Brenda

love
Jeff

aw Jeff what a heartbreaking story I hope for the doors to your being together open... I'm happy that I can bring some joy to your solitary current situation... you made me melt I felt your passion coming through when you said you wanted to hold her... I will that your dream come true...

love & hugs...

Brenda

thank you dearest Bender yay :)

I look forward to whatever may have been sparked...

love Brenda

The inner battles are hard. Be strong Brenda

thank you dearest Tim I will...

love Brenda

It’s safe to say I have a alter ego too.
F. Muse Cris  Kind

thank you dearest Shakesperan i'll be on the lookout for your alter :)

love Crim

It’s coming or should I say “second Coming”.and I might add another one of your writes that that sends coherent waves lengths  to my poetic ears

i'll watch for your second coming dearest Shakesperan  :)

love Crim

What I've noticed is that most times the good you emerges victorious. Sometimes inner war must be waged to rid us of our internal enemies.

thank you dearest Mystic One I believe so too :)

love Crim

Inspiring work lady. I wish you peace. I hope the ink that flows gives more comfort then blood.

thank you beautiful Jade for such a loving comment :)

love Brenda

Wow this was.an.Amazing piece..
From the start it gripped me....
I deal with this almost every day...
Great work dear Brenda
Always :)

thank you beautiful Autumn for showing love on this one I was afraid it was a bit kooky lol :)

love Brenda

evocation vis a vis coronation of macabre evinces a talent unlike my rather hum drum (oh so leftist Democratically crafted antiseptic) swirls of sentences that laughably (feeble attempts) try to pass muster as some grandiloquent theatrical, poetical liturgical, et cetera) masterpiece.

excellent that nary a hint about yar gender blatantly given as a spoiler alert. perhaps lack of perception asper obvious feminine or masculine less obvious pertaining to this (Dark Queen~a tale of two women) believable as though ye write from actual direct (object sun able) experience.

veneration of such realistic personas (harkening to what could be the medieval age) prompts me (a comic con, generic, non lipstick donning) to speculate ye harbor a personal predilection toward those knights in shining armor era.

asper myself? i cannot assimilate enough information about the American Civil War, which truth be told, would not be coon sit hard civil, nor war in the true sense (albeit two distinctly geographic countries), nonetheless the Yankee (dull dude) rarely tires of reading familiar details about that catastrophic event.

thank you graciously dearest George you honor me greatly you know reading this I can say you're right I didn't say my gender... well I'm both women in the story Crimsin being my alter ego who is quite dark and Brenda which is just plain old every day me... this story is basically how the two clash inside of me fighting for dominance in my writing...the warrior I guess would be that of my champions the reader who I feel have a soft spot for my gentler side and would be none to happy to see less of the dark Queen...

thank you for sharing your vision of this write and for sharing of your personal interests I love getting to know new people on a deeper level...

love Brenda

A wonderful psychological fantasy.  Brenda triumphs, far as I'm concerned.

aw thank you dearest Sir Crow :)

I did in the end...

love Brenda

Wow, I am out of words. Goodness always triumphs over evil. Brenda can't be locked in for too long. I am attached to this piece as it speaks to the war I have to face on the daily just to let the goodness in me outshine my darker side. Thank you Crim

love
NuBorn

thank you dearest Nuborn for sharing your own inner struggles to let your light side shine...you cause me to pause and consider the fight once more...

I deeply appreciate your thoughts...

love Brenda