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Poetry of color #1 Red
Raging passion
A broken heart bleeding
Heat of the moment
full of wanting and needing
A necklace of ruby
adorns the lover
A ring of garnet
for the Royal Arch brother
Fire of insight
burns and purifies
melts swords of iron
as it casts away lies
Sweet juicy fruit
of regeneration
Cherrys and berries
Sweet taste of temptation
Non apologetic
neither gentle nor meek
You can call on it
when strength you seek
A broken heart bleeding
Heat of the moment
full of wanting and needing
A necklace of ruby
adorns the lover
A ring of garnet
for the Royal Arch brother
Fire of insight
burns and purifies
melts swords of iron
as it casts away lies
Sweet juicy fruit
of regeneration
Cherrys and berries
Sweet taste of temptation
Non apologetic
neither gentle nor meek
You can call on it
when strength you seek
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Re. Poetry of color #1 Red
16th Aug 2018 5:03pm
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16th Aug 2018 5:23pm
Re. Poetry of color #1 Red
16th Aug 2018 5:16pm
What a beautiful description of red, I really got lost in these words as I read them aloud several times, reads beautifully as well :-))))))
Excellent scribe :-)))))
Excellent scribe :-)))))
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16th Aug 2018 5:24pm
Re. Poetry of color #1 Red
16th Aug 2018 5:45pm
love the rhyming and rhythm...red Mars, red stars, more things that are red....
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Re: Re. Poetry of color #1 Red
16th Aug 2018 7:37pm
Yes, I am thinking on incorporating some planets in the sequences of the color series.
Thank you for stopping by bc
Thank you for stopping by bc
Re. Poetry of color #1 Red
Anonymous
16th Aug 2018 6:23pm
Absolutely loved this...also read it a few times...because it is really well written🤗

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Re: Re. Poetry of color #1 Red
16th Aug 2018 7:37pm
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17th Aug 2018 00:49am
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Re: Re. Poetry of color #1 Red
17th Aug 2018 00:52am
Re. Poetry of color #1 Red
17th Aug 2018 3:51am
Oh, nicely done, Ange. You have outdone yourself. Kudos. Lovely rythm,.. it rolls off the tongue... Ely
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Re: Re. Poetry of color #1 Red
17th Aug 2018 4:23am
Thank you again...this was a fun write. It came on quick with rapid red energy.
Re. Poetry of color #1 Red
17th Aug 2018 11:32am
beaut
the expression
of my favorite of colors
loved the flow
and the rhythm
beauty
i find in the unforced
the expression
of my favorite of colors
loved the flow
and the rhythm
beauty
i find in the unforced
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17th Aug 2018 4:47pm