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Today
You said my name
You made me smile
For the first time I felt no pain
Only compassion and consile.
The greatest day of my life-
but also the worst,
Because that pain and strife,
Is what I felt burst.
Published 27th Oct 2011
| Edited 29th Sep 2016
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27th Oct 2011 12:19pm
I like the words you use to end your lines. It reminds me of myself. I am deeply in love with my husband, so I always find a reason to rhyme life with wife.
