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I want you
I have you
I need to feel all your body
I must taste your sensual skin
I desire your breathe in my ear
I conjure a flame in your vision
You feel the touch of my hand
You see the swirl of our souls
You hear the throbbing beat
You smell our lovers heat
You have me
Published 30th Jul 2018
| Edited 1st Aug 2018
Author's Note
pulsing desire for you
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30th Jul 2018 10:30am
Oh. It looks like I’m first in the queue ?! Yay for me... 😂 😉 😝
I adore this gentle side of you ~ 😎🎈🌞🌹🍃🌻
I adore this gentle side of you ~ 😎🎈🌞🌹🍃🌻
30th Jul 2018 11:37am
30th Jul 2018 11:18am
Why just have ... some ... wonderful erotic write my sweet poet ... love the leading with "I" in the first have of the body ... then "you" in the second ...
30th Jul 2018 11:35am
Anonymous
30th Jul 2018 1:17pm
Gorgeously written, loved it👌
30th Jul 2018 6:09pm
30th Jul 2018 11:47pm
I like you Jeff, you are so free with your heart. I’m not one for erotica, and I tread quicky when browsing to avoid it lol .
For me this poem is more of a love poem with a hint of flirty which I think takes a classy approach ..
More often than not erotic becomes mondane and predictable. Not my cup of tea personally. Here you show a painting Jeff, your heart is hers... love it!
Zazzles
For me this poem is more of a love poem with a hint of flirty which I think takes a classy approach ..
More often than not erotic becomes mondane and predictable. Not my cup of tea personally. Here you show a painting Jeff, your heart is hers... love it!
Zazzles
31st Jul 2018 3:41am
Thanks so much my lady J...you are perceptive...this is not meant as erotic but to show love and sex are best done at the same time...our modern porn world has been made to forget that...thus I post some lines from time to time labeled erotic and slide the heart into view
love
Jeff
love
Jeff
31st Jul 2018 3:37am
So so lovely dear Jeff. I can feel your loving heart. You are truly a passionate lover....
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
31st Jul 2018 3:42am
31st Jul 2018 3:37am
Well...
How.... direct!
Triggering some throbbing heat..!
Simple write of your heart is always so lovely.
As it must come naturally for you..
Delightful
Love,
Your follower
How.... direct!
Triggering some throbbing heat..!
Simple write of your heart is always so lovely.
As it must come naturally for you..
Delightful
Love,
Your follower
31st Jul 2018 3:45am
Thank you dearest Hanuel...your compliments always ring so sweetly in my ears
love
Jeff
love
Jeff
31st Jul 2018 12:57pm
dearest Jeff I love the form of this write
but the content is so beautiful...
love Crim
but the content is so beautiful...
love Crim
31st Jul 2018 6:26pm
Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
8th Aug 2018 2:30pm
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8th Aug 2018 2:32pm
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 6:45am
10th Jul 2019 12:54pm
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