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Do You Remember
Do you remember that old dirt road
Hearing the gravel crunch under the tires until we pulled off to the side
No need to ease the seat back
I climbed on top of you
Slick with liquid lust
You slid right in
Do you remember that old dirt road
Your breath on my neck while one hand intertwined my hair
The other grabbing a handful of ass
No need to muffle our satisfaction
You gave me two rides
I enjoyed them both
Hearing the gravel crunch under the tires until we pulled off to the side
No need to ease the seat back
I climbed on top of you
Slick with liquid lust
You slid right in
Do you remember that old dirt road
Your breath on my neck while one hand intertwined my hair
The other grabbing a handful of ass
No need to muffle our satisfaction
You gave me two rides
I enjoyed them both
Published 24th Jul 2018
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24th Jul 2018 4:28pm
Brava Tommie! The sound of the gravel beneath the tires got me. You paint a super sensuous scene...and I know there's honest experience in your words which make the scene even more vivid.
27th Jul 2018 11:41am
24th Jul 2018 9:01pm
Love the detailing! You catch the magic of vehicular sex beautifully. Wouldn't mind a detour down that old dirt road. Wonderful!
27th Jul 2018 11:43am
Much appreciated, Crow.
I wouldn't mind an instant replay. Thank you for reading.
I wouldn't mind an instant replay. Thank you for reading.
24th Jul 2018 9:21pm
27th Jul 2018 11:44am
25th Jul 2018 9:15pm
Love your combination of romantic and tawdry
Nothing sexier than a woman talkn bout wantn sex
Nothing sexier than a woman talkn bout wantn sex
27th Jul 2018 11:45am
25th Jul 2018 10:41pm
27th Jul 2018 11:46am
28th Jul 2018 8:21am
Following on from reading Fatboy's comments, the poem invites joking comments about "sex drives"!
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- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
17th Aug 2018 1:20pm
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17th Aug 2018 2:21pm
5th Sep 2018 8:34pm
Oh yes l do! Many other one's ! Steamy windows Oh could we write steamy poetry on that cold glass while inside your liquid lust !..Hot lips xx Vat xx T L Tender Loving xx wish I could send a dozen red roses to you...
25th Oct 2018 3:48am
