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dark nights!!!!
Many dark nights I felt your strength u felt mine with so much pain to release before I could speak u knew something had da best of me with each tear your presents I felt near with no were to turn no were to release I begin to give n a heart dat bleeds with in that has so much emotions its a heart that dies to shine a heart that hurts & long for a new beginning so badly broken the heart speaks but no 1 listings to each its own the power to move on the strength to stay strong the faith to hold on for a heart that has been badly broken this heart will always & forever remain out spoken
Published 23rd Oct 2011
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23rd Oct 2011 12:50pm
You have proven that your spelling is quite okay. So why then take that knowledge of the written word and spit all over it with a host of 'u's,' '1's,' 'dat's' and 'n's.' I would strongly suggest tidying this up. Given the topic of the work its far from a comedy, so why have it laughed at.
