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A brother left
It hit quick and unexpected
like a bullet hits the heart
Merciful for the one who left
Hard to accept for the ones left behind
We all have to leave some time
Silence....
Grief
like a bullet hits the heart
Merciful for the one who left
Hard to accept for the ones left behind
We all have to leave some time
Silence....
Grief
Author's Note
My husband's brother died...
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Re. A brother left
14th Jul 2018 5:23pm
Re. A brother left
14th Jul 2018 5:38pm
I'm so sorry. I feel your pain as it reminds me how my brother was taken away suddenly years back leaving behind two young children.
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Re. A brother left
14th Jul 2018 5:50pm
Aww, Sweetie... so sorry, hug your man for me, please... and tell him I said I love him...
And lotsa hugs for you too...
In the long run I hope you will be glad for the lack of lingering, for brother, yes... and so too for you. Love you... Ely
And lotsa hugs for you too...
In the long run I hope you will be glad for the lack of lingering, for brother, yes... and so too for you. Love you... Ely
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Re. A brother left
14th Jul 2018 5:54pm
Re. A brother left
14th Jul 2018 10:00pm
Re. A brother left
15th Jul 2018 4:16am
I'm deeply saddened for your loss. May the comfort you receive surpass the Love you shared here on earth.
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Re: Re. A brother left
16th Jul 2018 2:23am
Re. A brother left
Yes, we all have to leave at some point. I've recently been viewing some home VHS tapes that my Auntie kindly lend me to convert onto DVD. I've really enjoyed going back 25 years to see my Dad & my Nan & Grandad 'come alive' again. It helped to put some sort of perspective back into my life.
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Re: Re. A brother left
16th Jul 2018 2:10am
It would probably make me cry to see tapes of the folks that died in my family over the past years. It was a bunch of them really close together and some friends... I couldn't even take it in anymore. I had to stuff it down and take care of my life. One of these days I will open the box with the photos...when I have space.
Re. A brother left
16th Jul 2018 2:14am
Yes, it's the same for my Mum & my Auntie. It is too painful for them to watch right now but for the younger generation, they can learn so much about the people they never got to know.
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Re. A brother left
17th Jul 2018 4:10am
Re. A brother left
17th Jul 2018 2:54pm
Re. A brother left
17th Jul 2018 2:57pm
beautiful Angel I feel for your shared grief with your husband
sending my love to you...
love & hugs..
Brenda
sending my love to you...
love & hugs..
Brenda
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Re. A brother left
21st Jul 2018 9:50am
My younger brother took his own life some years back...this is poignant and oh so powerful Angel.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. A brother left
22nd Jul 2018 2:13am
Sorry for the loss of your brother. It's a sad thing....
Thanx for stopping by
A.
Thanx for stopping by
A.