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I Don't Belong
Days go by and I don't even care
Everything is pointless and extreamly unfair
I feel like shit and I just want to die
But it's too much work to say goodbye
I don't understand the point of being alive
If I have to fight everyday to survive
I have no purpose or reason or hope
Not even my hobbies are helping me cope
I don't know what to do with my life anymore
I just don't belong here in this world you adore
Everything is pointless and extreamly unfair
I feel like shit and I just want to die
But it's too much work to say goodbye
I don't understand the point of being alive
If I have to fight everyday to survive
I have no purpose or reason or hope
Not even my hobbies are helping me cope
I don't know what to do with my life anymore
I just don't belong here in this world you adore
Published 10th Jul 2018
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10th Jul 2018 7:24pm
your pain is deep here
and powerfully expressed...
there are others reading who I'm sure feel the same
if nothing else now they know they are not alone...
painful write beautifully expressed...
love Crim
and powerfully expressed...
there are others reading who I'm sure feel the same
if nothing else now they know they are not alone...
painful write beautifully expressed...
love Crim
11th Jul 2018 2:27am
10th Jul 2018 8:13pm
I do hope you find peace in your inner self...
I am pretty sure many of us have had those extended
life sucks experiences...
As for this :
"I just don't belong here in this world you adore"
Well , I am a *very* strange being , and follow a
magical , witchy Faery Path ;
I have seen other places...and they make this world
seem like a dark mirror ;
As my friend said one day :
"Nice world...I've seen better"...;)
Best to you !
I am pretty sure many of us have had those extended
life sucks experiences...
As for this :
"I just don't belong here in this world you adore"
Well , I am a *very* strange being , and follow a
magical , witchy Faery Path ;
I have seen other places...and they make this world
seem like a dark mirror ;
As my friend said one day :
"Nice world...I've seen better"...;)
Best to you !
19th Jul 2018 4:09am
Really nicely done,
It may sound a lil corny, but on my really morbid days I try to look at all this darkness simply as a black canvass ready to recreate...
It may sound a lil corny, but on my really morbid days I try to look at all this darkness simply as a black canvass ready to recreate...
19th Jul 2018 5:29pm
