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Friendship
Digging deep
shooting straight
that's how I like it
Don't bullshit me
I will cut you and
freeze you out
There are no books
being kept here
only stories being shared
Oral tradition
Our stories
We listen to each other's
You just want to have a monologue
means you will have to
find an idiot
who needs to feel needed
They are out there
Don't waste my time
but if you are real
the one in a hundred
you'll be my diamond
shooting straight
that's how I like it
Don't bullshit me
I will cut you and
freeze you out
There are no books
being kept here
only stories being shared
Oral tradition
Our stories
We listen to each other's
You just want to have a monologue
means you will have to
find an idiot
who needs to feel needed
They are out there
Don't waste my time
but if you are real
the one in a hundred
you'll be my diamond
Author's Note
Inspied by 616 " trust no one"
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Re. Friendship
3rd Jul 2018 4:39pm
superficial
is never a diamond
is it?
echo your sentiment here
truth and authenticity
outshine the most glittering of fakes
and the most polished of the bling
there is something about truth
that appeals to the soul
despite what eye sees
or as you've said...is put before the eye
expression.
gem.
is never a diamond
is it?
echo your sentiment here
truth and authenticity
outshine the most glittering of fakes
and the most polished of the bling
there is something about truth
that appeals to the soul
despite what eye sees
or as you've said...is put before the eye
expression.
gem.
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Re. Friendship
3rd Jul 2018 10:24pm
"You'll be my diamond." A great final line to an otherwise first-rate write. This is one of a hundred, a real gem!
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