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Civilization
Written by
LunasChild8
Published 2nd Jul 2018
Author's Note
Written for the Visual Poetry #humankind competition.
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Re. Civilization
2nd Jul 2018 5:06pm
we're all in this together...so let's row row row the boat, gently down the stream......:)
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Re: Re. Civilization
2nd Jul 2018 8:17pm
Re: Re. Civilization
2nd Jul 2018 9:07pm
Anonymous
- Edited 29th May 2019 8:45am
2nd Jul 2018 5:53pm
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Re: Re. Civilization
2nd Jul 2018 8:17pm
Re. Civilization
2nd Jul 2018 9:11pm
You're developing a style that i like a lot. The ability to be simple and clear. By simple, I don't mean simplistic, but to the point. And, by clear, I mean bringing to the forefront what is important in the picture you paint. And certainly, the concepts you deal with, are far from from simple and clear, but by making them your focus, you help your readers contemplate.
I liked it a lot!
I liked it a lot!
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Re: Re. Civilization
2nd Jul 2018 9:17pm
Re. Civilization
2nd Jul 2018 10:48pm
I am not quite sure that I agree with you but as you say "agreeing with me or not is irrelevant". We are all a foolish, pretentious race in general but it is when we do more than that nature seems to grant that we become something truly blessed.
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Re: Re. Civilization
2nd Jul 2018 10:54pm
Humans are a complicated species. I was just writing about one group of characteristics, but not all.
Thanks for your comment!
Thanks for your comment!
Re. Civilization
Anonymous
3rd Jul 2018 10:29pm
Absolutely fantastic Luna!!!
Outstanding job here!!
Outstanding job here!!
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Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 11:45am
5th Jul 2018 11:59am
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Re: Re. Civilization
5th Jul 2018 2:00pm
Re. Civilization
8th Jul 2018 1:12am