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Really Bites
No one knows
The pain I hide
Down hearted
Dumbfounded
Numb to life.
No, nothing
Seems right
I'm losing my grip
Can't see the light
Reality bites.
The pain I hide
Down hearted
Dumbfounded
Numb to life.
No, nothing
Seems right
I'm losing my grip
Can't see the light
Reality bites.
Published 1st Jul 2018
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2nd Jul 2018 9:29pm
4th Jul 2018 4:32am
Hey Faith......I’ve been here......the light I can’t see is usually blocked my own negative thoughts of myself.......you’re a beautiful......remember that......you are worthy of luv.......those who walk away from your light within are those who don’t realize what their losing.......sending you purple luv & hugs xo :)
5th Jul 2018 00:39am
Thank you, my sweet friend for your kind words. I'm so glad you're still here. Miss you lots. XO Faith
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30th Sep 2018 1:23am
30th Sep 2018 12:43pm
Love the simple flow ... crisp line breaks of this ... nice emoting/evoking ... I felt it ...
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8th May 2019 9:23pm
Thank you very much for reading and responding to my poem. It is greatly appreciated!
8th May 2019 10:32pm
I hope expressing here on DUP provides an outlet for your pain. Like your name, keep the Faith and trudge on. Well worded poem.
8th May 2019 11:59pm
Many thanks for your wonderful remarks? Yes, things are much improved since I wrote this!
