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Hope Lives
I can never get enough of you
and that confident smile
as your wit encases my mood
you're an afternoon splash of fervor
a gleam out off in the seas
a hope that's suddenly excited
the tide rushing in with each beat
a toast to the moon and the sunlight
a laugh in the favourable breeze
aimlessly we float with each other
when life doesn't always breathe peace
I can never get enough of you
as your blues look straight into mine
so I remind you each day you are beautiful
and offer you all of my time
and that confident smile
as your wit encases my mood
you're an afternoon splash of fervor
a gleam out off in the seas
a hope that's suddenly excited
the tide rushing in with each beat
a toast to the moon and the sunlight
a laugh in the favourable breeze
aimlessly we float with each other
when life doesn't always breathe peace
I can never get enough of you
as your blues look straight into mine
so I remind you each day you are beautiful
and offer you all of my time
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Re. Hope Lives
26th Jun 2018 12:36pm
Re. Hope Lives
26th Jun 2018 3:38pm
"A beautiful ode to your love" Tim...I am a parrot =:)
Such a lovely write!
love
Jasmine
Such a lovely write!
love
Jasmine
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26th Jun 2018 3:41pm
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Anonymous
11th Jul 2018 2:19pm
You, my friend, are a romantic! This is such a lovely poem and she is a lucky lady. :-)
...Willow
...Willow
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Re. Hope Lives
2nd Aug 2018 4:40pm
my least favorite line is line 13. I like the many metaphors, even in the third stanza.
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