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Sorceress
We have a strange telepathy,
She soothes me in the night.
Heaven melts within my soul
Like dripping candlelight.
When I close my eyes, I can feel
Her body next to mine;
I can't help falling in love with
An angel so divine.
She haunts me like a poltergeist,
Disrobes my sordid dreams,
Beckons me like a sorceress
To taste obscenity.
Enticing me within her realm;
An angel in disguise,
I rip her cotton panties off
And lick between her thighs.
She soothes me in the night.
Heaven melts within my soul
Like dripping candlelight.
When I close my eyes, I can feel
Her body next to mine;
I can't help falling in love with
An angel so divine.
She haunts me like a poltergeist,
Disrobes my sordid dreams,
Beckons me like a sorceress
To taste obscenity.
Enticing me within her realm;
An angel in disguise,
I rip her cotton panties off
And lick between her thighs.
Published 20th Jun 2018
Author's Note
Thinking of my princess...god help me.
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20th Jun 2018 2:07pm
I love the rawness that exists in this piece of text. Absolutely intriguing.
Mmm... she’s definitely a lucky girl ! 😎🎈🌞🌹
Mmm... she’s definitely a lucky girl ! 😎🎈🌞🌹
20th Jun 2018 2:18pm
20th Jun 2018 2:12pm
dearest Dark Sun so sensually and passionately erotic
so beautifully done..
love Crim
so beautifully done..
love Crim
20th Jun 2018 2:16pm
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20th Jun 2018 5:44pm
20th Jun 2018 6:59pm
Well written, however the mystique would be to not use the words Cotton panties but something of a forbidden nature that would go along with the theme more.
20th Jun 2018 7:15pm
Thanks for your comments. I know what you mean, I put that last line in as a joke.
21st Jun 2018 12:16pm
Wonderful write ... I can feel her enchantment ... how she's put you under her spell ... nice splicing of tenderness ... with just the right hint of naughtiness ... she sounds like my kind of girl ... indeed
21st Jun 2018 6:20pm
21st Jun 2018 6:17pm
last two lines were delicious
bless u even again
could taste em
I rip her cotton panties off
And lick between her thighs.
bless u even again
could taste em
I rip her cotton panties off
And lick between her thighs.
21st Jun 2018 6:22pm
21st Jun 2018 6:25pm
nothing cummmss 4 free
every thing has to be purchased
thanks poet
erotica imagery is again's mastery
have u not read any
may go see
every thing has to be purchased
thanks poet
erotica imagery is again's mastery
have u not read any
may go see
