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The Ocean
Push me away
Pull me in
Wash over me your power
Thrust deep
Beneath the surface
Arch back
For the waves of passion
Over...under...through
Hear me moan
As we move to and fro
In unison with nature
Trance-like
Pushing
Pulling
Steady rhythms
Punctuated by powerful thrusts
Reaching new heighths
New depths
As before untouched
Your salty waters seeping into crevices
Previously thought to be dried up wells
But for the passion with which
You draw me forward
Cresting waves of ecstasy atop
Layers of treasures
To be discovered...explored...
The slightest touch
Sending shudders felt in the darkest places
You slow your rhythms
Wanting to hear...
To feel with your WHOLE being
The impact of your might
Each wave
Each thrust
Bringing new levels of pleasure
Careful to leave me wanting for more
Stopping to see me wrythe in quivering anticipation
Of what your waves will bring forth
From me
As you slip over my wetness
Drawing
Untapped
Convulsions
Behind me
Torrents of force
Explode
Crashing against the shore
Drawing from deep within
The roar of ultimate pleasure
As we crest together once more
Then fall to the sand
Dissipating into blissfulness.
Pull me in
Wash over me your power
Thrust deep
Beneath the surface
Arch back
For the waves of passion
Over...under...through
Hear me moan
As we move to and fro
In unison with nature
Trance-like
Pushing
Pulling
Steady rhythms
Punctuated by powerful thrusts
Reaching new heighths
New depths
As before untouched
Your salty waters seeping into crevices
Previously thought to be dried up wells
But for the passion with which
You draw me forward
Cresting waves of ecstasy atop
Layers of treasures
To be discovered...explored...
The slightest touch
Sending shudders felt in the darkest places
You slow your rhythms
Wanting to hear...
To feel with your WHOLE being
The impact of your might
Each wave
Each thrust
Bringing new levels of pleasure
Careful to leave me wanting for more
Stopping to see me wrythe in quivering anticipation
Of what your waves will bring forth
From me
As you slip over my wetness
Drawing
Untapped
Convulsions
Behind me
Torrents of force
Explode
Crashing against the shore
Drawing from deep within
The roar of ultimate pleasure
As we crest together once more
Then fall to the sand
Dissipating into blissfulness.
Author's Note
Copyright @ColorMeSmiling
My happy place, my source of inspiration is the sea...so incredibly powerful, yet so calming. Making love is very much like the waves of the ocean crashing upon the shore....
This is only my third foray into writing more sensual poetry and my first time
sharing. This is freshly-written this eve. So be kind. I do welcome your suggestions/comments.
Thank you! ~LAA
My happy place, my source of inspiration is the sea...so incredibly powerful, yet so calming. Making love is very much like the waves of the ocean crashing upon the shore....
This is only my third foray into writing more sensual poetry and my first time
sharing. This is freshly-written this eve. So be kind. I do welcome your suggestions/comments.
Thank you! ~LAA
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Re. The Ocean
Original poetry,That is how it is ,or should be. Making love, a delicate art to write of such another. Your use of water and the waves makes the whole flow and is easily read Kexby
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19th Jun 2018 6:16pm
Re. The Ocean
19th Jun 2018 11:53am
Wow ... love this on so many levels ... first love love love the ocean ... then the splendor of this erotica ... pulls me under ... wonderful my poetess ...
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Re: Re. The Ocean
19th Jun 2018 6:18pm
Thank you so very much LilDragonFly! That means a tremendous amount from you! 😊😌
Re. The Ocean
19th Jun 2018 4:12pm
I like the way you've personifed the ocean to the narrator's round of love-making. Your details are very sensual, and allow the readers a clear visual of what's happening.
Great work!
Great work!
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Re: Re. The Ocean
19th Jun 2018 6:20pm
Thank you so very much, LunasChild! I so appreciate your kind words! 😌😌😌
Re. The Ocean
19th Jun 2018 7:37pm
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19th Jun 2018 10:06pm
Re. The Ocean
19th Jun 2018 9:55pm
you may not of course know
this scene you depict clearly
a visual real i have seen
a couple fucking on the beach
in waters not too deep
ere both would have got sucked unknowingly
ur an up cummer i c
read again and compare
how both in eroticae poetry only
u fare
this scene you depict clearly
a visual real i have seen
a couple fucking on the beach
in waters not too deep
ere both would have got sucked unknowingly
ur an up cummer i c
read again and compare
how both in eroticae poetry only
u fare
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Re: Re. The Ocean
19th Jun 2018 10:05pm
Thank you so very much, Again!! I’ve not seen this in person, but have had a similar experience on the sand...definitely not the same. Lol! I appreciate your kind words regarding me being an up and comer. 🙏~LA
Re: Re. The Ocean
19th Jun 2018 10:27pm
poetry is basically imagery
we all have done it actually
sand stones rocks cars back seats tubs and seas
all is similarly
only need solid holding
lest one physically does burst
and hurt
continue ur imagination
it will make guys cummm
like birds to bees and bees to honey
all is ultimately same thing
we all have done it actually
sand stones rocks cars back seats tubs and seas
all is similarly
only need solid holding
lest one physically does burst
and hurt
continue ur imagination
it will make guys cummm
like birds to bees and bees to honey
all is ultimately same thing
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Re. The Ocean
Anonymous
20th Jun 2018 8:30am
this so vivid and sensual..
the pace and wording of this vibe
captivated the senses..
the pace and wording of this vibe
captivated the senses..

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Re: Re. The Ocean
21st Jun 2018 5:00pm
Naajir...Thank you so very much! That’s truly helpful as the flow of my pieces is important to me. Appreciate you!
Re. The Ocean
Anonymous
22nd Jun 2018 8:50am
love this write so much, i have a total affinity with the sea and have always lived by it in one place or another, i love how you brought it alive and your word choice and phrasing were fabulous! i look forward to reading more from you :)
Ben
Ben

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Re: Re. The Ocean
22nd Jun 2018 9:00am
Ben~Thank you so very much! The ocean is my ‘happy place’ for sure! I’m so happy it resonated with you and thank you for your kind words! ~L
Re. The Ocean
22nd Jun 2018 9:04am
Color, this is awesome! I too love the ocean in all it's majestic power. Sensuality and the sea are two forces difficult to capture with words. You have done so beautifully. Brava!
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Re: Re. The Ocean
22nd Jun 2018 9:17am
Thank you soooo much, Gahddess_Worship! I so appreciate your thoughtful feedback and am thrilled it resonates with you. The ocean is indeed a powerful force on many levels. 💜
Re. The Ocean
Anonymous
22nd Jun 2018 3:44pm
Oh wow how erotic...
So where is this ocean again??! Lol
Great job herey dear :)
So where is this ocean again??! Lol
Great job herey dear :)

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Re: Re. The Ocean
24th Jun 2018 9:54pm
Thank you soooo much! That particular poem was inspired by the ocean in Seaside, Oregon, but it does the same for me here in SoCal. 😋🌊
Re. The Ocean
24th Jun 2018 5:41am
Re: Re. The Ocean
24th Jun 2018 9:56pm
Wow! Thank you so very much for your kind praise! Encourages me to keep writing! 😌
Re. The Ocean
Anonymous
12th Jul 2018 9:13pm
I find My peace at the ocean at least weekly.
I was Unaware I would Also find such intimate desire.
RL add.... nuff said....
I was Unaware I would Also find such intimate desire.
RL add.... nuff said....

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Re: Re. The Ocean
13th Jul 2018 5:49am
I find my peace there, too. Isn’t it divine? Thank you sooooo very much for the RL add! I fee honored! 😌