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Impetus
He hesitates to self-reflect
Examine every last defect
Exposed to the reader's eye
Every insult, every lie
He still writes exactly how he feels
Hopes to hell it somehow heals
All this fear and all this rage
Contained on a website's page
His muse offers him advice
Write it out, but add some spice
She shuts him up, no need to talk
As she takes him deftly by the cock
She inspires with her hand
While he types to her demand
He comes hard at high midnight
Finally wrapping up another write.
Examine every last defect
Exposed to the reader's eye
Every insult, every lie
He still writes exactly how he feels
Hopes to hell it somehow heals
All this fear and all this rage
Contained on a website's page
His muse offers him advice
Write it out, but add some spice
She shuts him up, no need to talk
As she takes him deftly by the cock
She inspires with her hand
While he types to her demand
He comes hard at high midnight
Finally wrapping up another write.
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Re. Impetus
17th Jun 2018 10:43pm
Short, simple, well done.
No sign language here, her actions speak louder then word!!! If you want to know the meaning of what I just said pm me
No sign language here, her actions speak louder then word!!! If you want to know the meaning of what I just said pm me
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Re: Re. Impetus
17th Jun 2018 10:49pm
Re: Re. Impetus
17th Jun 2018 10:52pm
Your welcome, keep being inspired. I truly enjoyed the poem very much
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Re. Impetus
17th Jun 2018 11:12pm
dearest Sir Crow that will inspire many a hardened look
into what drives a man to write..
sexy inking..
love Raven
into what drives a man to write..
sexy inking..
love Raven
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Re: Re. Impetus
19th Jun 2018 10:56pm
Re. Impetus
18th Jun 2018 00:29am
Sir Crow. It seems your muse drives your manual transmission well. Bravo!
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Re: Re. Impetus
19th Jun 2018 10:58pm
No, there's nothing quite like a stick shift. I just hope she doesn't put me in reverse. Thanks Gahdess!
Re: Re. Impetus
19th Jun 2018 11:12pm
Re. Impetus
18th Jun 2018 00:39am
Re: Re. Impetus
19th Jun 2018 10:59pm
Re. Impetus
18th Jun 2018 12:55pm
Oh ... I just love love love this ... so intimate with your muse ... the sensuality/sexuality of it all ... totally swept me up ... bravo my sweet crowfly ...
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Re: Re. Impetus
19th Jun 2018 11:01pm
Thanks LilDragonFly. A sexy muse can be a distraction at times, but that's okay with me.
Re. Impetus
18th Jun 2018 2:12pm
Driven, towards a sweet release ! Nothing to complain about there, that’s for sure ~ 🌞🎈😎🌹
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19th Jun 2018 11:02pm