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Border Lines
The child has her number memorized
An aunt beyond the fence
Waiting for her little niece
Waiting for the call
The child forced into a tent
Then not a further sign
Few news crews allowed to check
Reveal what's inside
No clue as to policy
Confusion as to law
Detention centers on the rise
Expanding while a child cries.
An aunt beyond the fence
Waiting for her little niece
Waiting for the call
The child forced into a tent
Then not a further sign
Few news crews allowed to check
Reveal what's inside
No clue as to policy
Confusion as to law
Detention centers on the rise
Expanding while a child cries.
Published 19th Jun 2018
Author's Note
Written after watching the news this morning.
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19th Jun 2018 9:29pm
dearest Sir Crow very troubling days
you are a sensitive and caring spirit..
love Raven
you are a sensitive and caring spirit..
love Raven
19th Jun 2018 9:45pm
Thanks, Raven. I imagine you care deeply too. I just wish there was something we could do.
19th Jun 2018 9:34pm
The face of the current Republican party hijacked by this monster ... fills me full of rage ... great write my poet ...
19th Jun 2018 9:47pm
I agree that we're dealing with a monster, and I'm outraged myself. Thank you LilDragonFly.
19th Jun 2018 9:41pm
This write dear Crow has touched a scar deep inside.
I could not help but tear up while I read these words.
Well done Crowfly
I could not help but tear up while I read these words.
Well done Crowfly
19th Jun 2018 9:50pm
Thank you Bonzi. I know how you feel. I shed some tears seeing the news footage (limited in scope by authorities) offered by talk shows and news this morning. Very much like the Japanese internment camps from WWII, seems to me.
19th Jun 2018 9:48pm
Awesome, Crowfly,!
We need more, until the insufferable bastard drown beneath our words...
We need more, until the insufferable bastard drown beneath our words...
19th Jun 2018 9:52pm
Well said, Ely. I wouldn't mind seeing him legally and politically buried myself. Thank you!
19th Jun 2018 11:21pm
19th Jun 2018 11:41pm
This fuckin fascist thing has been creeping in for a long time...bit by bit, step by step...This is not a partisan issue. Unless it truely is seen as a moral issue and we unite to do something about it, it like many other moral issues, will get worse. Think detention camps for Japanese, then Guantanamo, now the kids and next.....YOU!
Thank you crowfly and everybody else who speaks up.
Thank you crowfly and everybody else who speaks up.
20th Jun 2018 00:31am
dearest Sir Crow deplorable when our children are treated this way
a feeling of helplessness overcomes..
you speak for the voiceless here..
love Crim
a feeling of helplessness overcomes..
you speak for the voiceless here..
love Crim
20th Jun 2018 00:36am
Yeah it’s discussing what’s happening and the fact that we allow this makes it even worst !
Great expression Crow thanks for sharing
Luv
Broom xo
Great expression Crow thanks for sharing
Luv
Broom xo
Anonymous
20th Jun 2018 7:05pm
It is heartbreaking and disgusting and your poem so eloquently describes the tragedy with caring and compassion.
Anonymous
21st Jun 2018 10:35am
Truly sad days, in the US and in many European countries, not last the one that hosts me atm. I hope people will head the teachings of history before it's too late. The pen, dear Crow, is a mighty weapon. Emperors have fallen thanks to it. We all need to stand together in this fight. J.
