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Dear Supreme Being...
Dear Supreme Being...
I don't know who you are...
or what you are...
or even if you are...
But I figure you gotta be more reasonable
than the average Human Being...
So... I been thinkin'... Maybe y'all would be up
for takin' a look at this shit that's goin' on over here?
And maybe help us out?
I mean, Supreme Being...
that I haven't a clue... how to do... what I know's
the right thing... I mean not without doing wrong...
Thanks for Listenin', Sincerely, Me
PS... not to pressure you or anything... but we do got a little bit of hurry-up happening here. Ta
I don't know who you are...
or what you are...
or even if you are...
But I figure you gotta be more reasonable
than the average Human Being...
So... I been thinkin'... Maybe y'all would be up
for takin' a look at this shit that's goin' on over here?
And maybe help us out?
I mean, Supreme Being...
that I haven't a clue... how to do... what I know's
the right thing... I mean not without doing wrong...
Thanks for Listenin', Sincerely, Me
PS... not to pressure you or anything... but we do got a little bit of hurry-up happening here. Ta
Published 15th Jun 2018
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Anonymous
15th Jun 2018 7:27pm
I like this. I can surely relate. Nice work.
15th Jun 2018 8:39pm
I enjoy your thinking and anxiety. Here it is no better. There is an evil blanketing the nations. I like the way you write . The opening lines excellent economical,thank you Kexby
16th Jun 2018 2:50pm
Thank you, Kexby... for the read... for the comprehension, .. and for the critique,
Means a lot, coming from you. Ely
Means a lot, coming from you. Ely
