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Peleth Undomiel (co-written with Ken)
They say a mortal life
Lasts a hundred years at most
A mere blink of an eye
Compared to the time I’ve had with you
I’ve taught you from a child
And watched you turn into
A woman that excels
At everything you do
So how do I then
Do what I now must do
Let go of the one heart
That I’ve protected through and through
Please Tell me my child
There’s something I don’t see
What to do to To reverse or change these events
That pulls you away from me
I’ve fought the darkest foes
And seen the darkest day
And never yet have felt
This much pain or dismay
I know you think I’m stern
But please try to understand
How much my heart is breaking
As I’m now holding your hand
As much I I want
To keep you safe with me
I have to let you fly
And let your heart be free
So remember this
Wherever you may go
I’ll always be here
Loving you more than you may know.
-
It is done; I have chosen my fate
The choice of Lúthien, both the sweet and the bitter
Tell me, Adar, what is that in your gaze?
The torment of losing your only daughter.
From the moment I saw him, I knew he was the one
Exactly what grandmother’s mirror had shown
A warmth spread through my fëa as if under the sun
And I knew I would rather live a mortal life than spend all the ages of the world alone.
Dear Adar, I know you are in pain
Perhaps as much as when Naneth sailed
My love is both beautiful and saddening as the coming of the rain
Please do not feel as if you have failed.
To protect me from the mortal fate
I have gladly made this choice
Beyond the realms of Arda, I know there is something great
Until the time will come, my love I shall enjoy.
Please send my love to Naneth, whom I miss very much
I do not wish to cause you suffering, Adar
I will always remember her gentle touch
For I am the daughter of Elrond and Celebrian; the Evenstar.
Despite my long life, only now do I feel alive
I have finally found my fëa-mate
Yet why, Adar, do you wish to cry?
Your own fëa is burdened by a terrible weight.
I am now Queen of the Reunited Kingdom of Arnor and Gondor
United Elf and Man in peaceful love and harmony
I shall spend the rest of my life as a mortal
My choice has brought you agony.
I bestow upon the ringbearer my place on the ship to Valinor
For I am now bound to remain in Middle-Earth
Even being with my love, this pain inside of me I cannot ignore
Life is worth living, both through the suffering and the joy, I have learned.
Lasts a hundred years at most
A mere blink of an eye
Compared to the time I’ve had with you
I’ve taught you from a child
And watched you turn into
A woman that excels
At everything you do
So how do I then
Do what I now must do
Let go of the one heart
That I’ve protected through and through
Please Tell me my child
There’s something I don’t see
What to do to To reverse or change these events
That pulls you away from me
I’ve fought the darkest foes
And seen the darkest day
And never yet have felt
This much pain or dismay
I know you think I’m stern
But please try to understand
How much my heart is breaking
As I’m now holding your hand
As much I I want
To keep you safe with me
I have to let you fly
And let your heart be free
So remember this
Wherever you may go
I’ll always be here
Loving you more than you may know.
-
It is done; I have chosen my fate
The choice of Lúthien, both the sweet and the bitter
Tell me, Adar, what is that in your gaze?
The torment of losing your only daughter.
From the moment I saw him, I knew he was the one
Exactly what grandmother’s mirror had shown
A warmth spread through my fëa as if under the sun
And I knew I would rather live a mortal life than spend all the ages of the world alone.
Dear Adar, I know you are in pain
Perhaps as much as when Naneth sailed
My love is both beautiful and saddening as the coming of the rain
Please do not feel as if you have failed.
To protect me from the mortal fate
I have gladly made this choice
Beyond the realms of Arda, I know there is something great
Until the time will come, my love I shall enjoy.
Please send my love to Naneth, whom I miss very much
I do not wish to cause you suffering, Adar
I will always remember her gentle touch
For I am the daughter of Elrond and Celebrian; the Evenstar.
Despite my long life, only now do I feel alive
I have finally found my fëa-mate
Yet why, Adar, do you wish to cry?
Your own fëa is burdened by a terrible weight.
I am now Queen of the Reunited Kingdom of Arnor and Gondor
United Elf and Man in peaceful love and harmony
I shall spend the rest of my life as a mortal
My choice has brought you agony.
I bestow upon the ringbearer my place on the ship to Valinor
For I am now bound to remain in Middle-Earth
Even being with my love, this pain inside of me I cannot ignore
Life is worth living, both through the suffering and the joy, I have learned.
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