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Thunder Moon
Suddenly day
turns night
sun, a fiery ball
in hovering clouds
She pours herself
enough deep red
to stain lips
Candles lit sporadically
throughout rooms
glittering warm light
She sits beside
her open windows
taking in balmy breezes
Rain falls in tumultuous waves
lightning zig zags
across steely skies
Rolling, crashing,
thunder Moon, hidden
so powerfully present
turns night
sun, a fiery ball
in hovering clouds
She pours herself
enough deep red
to stain lips
Candles lit sporadically
throughout rooms
glittering warm light
She sits beside
her open windows
taking in balmy breezes
Rain falls in tumultuous waves
lightning zig zags
across steely skies
Rolling, crashing,
thunder Moon, hidden
so powerfully present
Published 5th Jun 2018
| Edited 6th Jun 2018
Author's Note
Written in July of 2017 in honor of Thunder Moon
I love the Moon and Thunder ☆
I love the Moon and Thunder ☆
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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6th Jun 2018 00:28am
Beautiful imagery, JeJe. ☁🌕
I would strongly suggest losing the caps except for the beginning of each sentence. This will greatly enhance the flow. 🌊
I would strongly suggest losing the caps except for the beginning of each sentence. This will greatly enhance the flow. 🌊
6th Jun 2018 00:30am
Thank you Ahavati for the beautiful comments and for bringing the capitals to my attention... something my phone does automatically, so annoying lol 😊
