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Poetically Poetry
there’s this Blank Verus rush, this fix from poetry that lingers Senryu euphoria under my breath,
yet, I’ve never envisioned my prose as a high.
it’s never quenched my Terza Rima thirst, or artificially fulfilled me from Pastoral purging.
i’ve never made love to him,
never felt his Haikus skin against mine.
my Limerick limbs never spread wide enough to let him in, though I paused for Sonnets-ink to artistically bleed onto lineless sheets of my heart.
he has never entertained me that way.
so often I exploited Romanticism as a Tanka stimulus, and heartbreak as an actress with no headliner, or sold out Epic shows to place my pen’s Shakespearean story center-stage, with an Acrostic mic, to elevate his voice.
he’s never had a Free verse allotment
that offers an alignment parallel with my Villanelle moods. his thoughts flowed from a Visual quill of ungovernable spill, without my aid because,... I never willed him.
but…
when the Ghazal lyrics finally comes, he cuts deeply, making me feel Burlesque through his oral Concrete heritage.
his ascendants caress the strands of
muted linguistics and lure my roar,
my .....Cantos cry.
and every emotion known hemorrhaged on scented parchment, inflamed by his merciless pleas to be understood.
and I…..I just can’t help but love his Carpe diem force because ......he has never forced me poetically,
rather, his force has constantly.... saved....
me.
RainC
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Haha... Who cares about comments? 😊When poets like yourself come along and taste me with your eyes...my skin becomes smitten...
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1st Jun 2018 4:11pm
I wish DU had a LOVE button because i absolutely love your response, Melia! 😘 I dont have the words to convey just how joyful as an writer youve made me feel. Thank you so much and I adore you for keeping her! ❤
Ps. Love your avatar.
Ps. Love your avatar.
Re. Poetically Poetry
1st Jun 2018 12:53pm
Wow, I'm glad I caught this one Tara. A beautiful, elegant, eloquent expression of your love of poetic, lyrical verse. I'm stunned by it and as for the graphics? Just Wow baby
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1st Jun 2018 4:17pm
Hey Tony, thanks babe! Glad you caught it too. Not sure how long it'll be before i post again. I have alittle time now that school is out. Ill be able to catch some of your work. 😊 Thank for snatching her up!
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1st Jun 2018 2:44pm
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1st Jun 2018 4:21pm
Thank you so much Lyrically I! Happy To see a new face around my part of town. Will definately check you out! 😊
Re. Poetically Poetry
1st Jun 2018 3:30pm
Hullo, Lady
chuckled a bit at Limerick limbs. was in Limerick not too long ago, it's quite the place haha 😆
grand read, some forms I never knew and can look into. but more than that the underlying narrative is solid too
not much I can say to be of construction. I'm on the makes instead of making side of the spectrum ..but we won't fall out over your ...misspelling
*hat tip*
chuckled a bit at Limerick limbs. was in Limerick not too long ago, it's quite the place haha 😆
grand read, some forms I never knew and can look into. but more than that the underlying narrative is solid too
not much I can say to be of construction. I'm on the makes instead of making side of the spectrum ..but we won't fall out over your ...misspelling
*hat tip*
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1st Jun 2018 4:31pm
Well hey there you! 😉 First off, you know im always stoked when you serenade me with your artistic presence. Secondly, there hasnt been one poem that i didnt mispell a word or two or three or four. lol..
I like to blame it on me posting at 1 in the morning, while on pain meds and sipping alittle something, but truth is, i cant spell worth shit!!!😂😅 Thanks luv for the rare visit.
I like to blame it on me posting at 1 in the morning, while on pain meds and sipping alittle something, but truth is, i cant spell worth shit!!!😂😅 Thanks luv for the rare visit.
Re. Poetically Poetry
1st Jun 2018 11:40pm
Eloquent, most definitely. And quite the learning experience for those of us weird enuff to look up theunfamiliar terms.
If only poetry had been delivered to me this way as a high schooler
Many thanks to you for an eye opening poetic excursion
If only poetry had been delivered to me this way as a high schooler
Many thanks to you for an eye opening poetic excursion
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5th Jun 2018 8:36pm
Aww....very kind response you've left me, 3plus!
Thank you for the poetic love.😊
Thank you for the poetic love.😊
Re. Poetically Poetry
12th Jun 2018 10:40pm
Now this was poetically brilliant and beautiful.... You left me on a high.... Flowed with such eloquence... Your pen flowed with ease.... Made me miss poetry.... Beautiful....
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
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19th Jun 2018 3:30pm
This is poetry as poetry should be I enjoyed reading this because of the honesty within. Many poems are written as writing exercises The poet must have depth in which to dig and the plant to root do not enrich the earth beyond that is necessary; remember the reader will understand you before adding their own Reading poetry is more important than the writing once you have shared your poetry. Kexby
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Re. Poetically Poetry
7th Oct 2018 5:07pm
Liking the revamp. This sounds like it would've been a tough piece to write with all those lyrical terms involved. Clever.
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23rd Jun 2019 10:41am
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Anonymous
2nd Aug 2019 1:07am
Rain.. wonderful as always.. much love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
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2nd Aug 2019 2:23am
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6th Aug 2019 11:20am
Ah yea... I’ve soooooo missed ur elegant verse
my ‘Sweet Reign’ 😊... very nicely inked!
my ‘Sweet Reign’ 😊... very nicely inked!
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12th Aug 2019 1:58am
Miss tara you write has a strong captivating spectrum. Your lovely write to sensual nods of petic rapture. You have entered my list of poets. Your quil is astonishing as in seduces the pad.
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12th Aug 2019 2:16am
What an amazing comment, Liam! Thank you for bringing poetically love to my doorstep! I appreciate you!😊
Re. Poetically Poetry
16th Aug 2019 4:45am
There is really nothing I can say which do justice to your pen. I will just emphasize my favorite part:
“when the Ghazal lyrics finally comes, he cuts deeply, making me feel Burlesque through his oral Concrete heritage.
his ascendants caress the strands of
muted linguistics and lure my roar,
my .....Cantos cry. “
“when the Ghazal lyrics finally comes, he cuts deeply, making me feel Burlesque through his oral Concrete heritage.
his ascendants caress the strands of
muted linguistics and lure my roar,
my .....Cantos cry. “
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17th Aug 2019 11:21am
Thank you Jazz! It's so good to hear from you, friend. Missed our connection....
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17th Dec 2019 10:38am
this in absolutely incredible writing.. & Your poetry is a pleasure to read. :) hey i love to write as well :) so please check my site poemtheart. thank you, hope you like it.. !
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7th Jun 2021 11:54pm
This will resonate to all those who are true lovers of words.
Salute To You Poetess
Salute To You Poetess
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4th May 2022 10:36am
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8th Mar 2024 8:13am
Such beauty your pen creates.
I especially love the references to poetry.
I missed your work <3
-slowly finding my way back-
I especially love the references to poetry.
I missed your work <3
-slowly finding my way back-
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