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Of changes to come...
You say you want protection
but you give them
the coordinates to find you
You say you want truth
but you give them
the fold to blind you
You say you want freedom
but you give them
the shackles to bind you
After all is said and done
they have come for you
never mind you
but you give them
the coordinates to find you
You say you want truth
but you give them
the fold to blind you
You say you want freedom
but you give them
the shackles to bind you
After all is said and done
they have come for you
never mind you
Published 27th May 2018
Author's Note
This is what I see going on and more of it to come. We are just getting warmed up...
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27th May 2018 9:30pm
27th May 2018 9:42pm
Thanks for responding. I was inspired by a discussion and then this just shot into my mind. Funny how that happens with poetry.
Best
A.
Best
A.
27th May 2018 9:44pm
I love it when that kind of thing happens ... it's like my poetic voice just has to come forth with something to say ...
27th May 2018 9:56pm
Exactly....it comes out of the flow of the moment....effortless. It feels most satisfying.
27th May 2018 10:10pm
I just wrote something as well , along a similar line...
Very well done , Angelast !
( what do you mean telling me you don't rhyme ? )...lol !
Very well done , Angelast !
( what do you mean telling me you don't rhyme ? )...lol !
27th May 2018 10:22pm
Well.... I guess you turned me on to it. A little here and there....
If I want to collaborate with you one of these days, I better get versed in it....right?
If I want to collaborate with you one of these days, I better get versed in it....right?
27th May 2018 10:24pm
You have my *full support*...;)
It really is fun ( and amazing ) when you
start hearing things in rhyme in your head...
Just takes a little self programming !
It really is fun ( and amazing ) when you
start hearing things in rhyme in your head...
Just takes a little self programming !
