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Where’s the Sun
My soul , it creaks and moans .
Like the hull , of an old wooden ship ,
lost , adrift , alone .
On the roof of the sea .
Torrent , upon the tempest it cries ,
my sails tattered , my mast snapped .
The rider a ghost , and it looks like me .
Railings propped , along the sky ,
gird the darkness in her eyes .
The mist rises up , off the brow ,
from where the sun used to rise ,
and make Venus bow .
It too crashed !
A black chunk of char , cold and dead ,
it’s sad demise .
Venus now ! the goddess of doom .
Thor with his hammer , droops and sighs ,
his mighty stature now shrouded in gloom .
The stars are gone too !
They were never really there ,
and the moon , no longer sits in his chair .
The wind though still whips !
with souls , lost , twirling in its grips .
Along the alleyway , upon the sea ,
churned up , as the freighter purrs ,
silently .
With its ghostly cargo , I look around ,
no one , do I see !
Not even the ghost , that looked like me .
And without a mirror , lighted by a flickering lamp ,
I can’t even see me .
So on we go , well , only me .
Left to sail alone !
On this biting dark sea .
Like the hull , of an old wooden ship ,
lost , adrift , alone .
On the roof of the sea .
Torrent , upon the tempest it cries ,
my sails tattered , my mast snapped .
The rider a ghost , and it looks like me .
Railings propped , along the sky ,
gird the darkness in her eyes .
The mist rises up , off the brow ,
from where the sun used to rise ,
and make Venus bow .
It too crashed !
A black chunk of char , cold and dead ,
it’s sad demise .
Venus now ! the goddess of doom .
Thor with his hammer , droops and sighs ,
his mighty stature now shrouded in gloom .
The stars are gone too !
They were never really there ,
and the moon , no longer sits in his chair .
The wind though still whips !
with souls , lost , twirling in its grips .
Along the alleyway , upon the sea ,
churned up , as the freighter purrs ,
silently .
With its ghostly cargo , I look around ,
no one , do I see !
Not even the ghost , that looked like me .
And without a mirror , lighted by a flickering lamp ,
I can’t even see me .
So on we go , well , only me .
Left to sail alone !
On this biting dark sea .
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