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Is Love Forever?
“Is love forever?"
I silently ask.
I sit and ponder
As I think of my past.
I have seen love,
Saw its effects.
Have I felt love?,
This I reflect.
I can recall
Feelings of bliss,
Memories of happiness,
Even a sweet kiss.
These images,
They scatter away.
Replaced with a pain
That grows each day.
“No, love is not forever,"
I finally say.
Love is temporary,
It will always decay.
I silently ask.
I sit and ponder
As I think of my past.
I have seen love,
Saw its effects.
Have I felt love?,
This I reflect.
I can recall
Feelings of bliss,
Memories of happiness,
Even a sweet kiss.
These images,
They scatter away.
Replaced with a pain
That grows each day.
“No, love is not forever,"
I finally say.
Love is temporary,
It will always decay.
Published 21st May 2018
Author's Note
My first poem I ever wrote.
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21st May 2018 3:27pm
The truth sings through the pain and we still seek more love. Great first poem.
22nd May 2018 2:25am
22nd May 2018 5:06am
I love the short rhyming technique you have used, it is very effective.
Psalm 100:5
For the Lord is good and his love endures forever;
his faithfulness continues through all generations.
Psalm 100:5
For the Lord is good and his love endures forever;
his faithfulness continues through all generations.
22nd May 2018 1:57pm
15th Jun 2018 5:13pm
love is like a males toy
it grows and one enjoys
when it sleeps
sad it is
so it's with love miss
nice poetry
or doubt 'tis
it grows and one enjoys
when it sleeps
sad it is
so it's with love miss
nice poetry
or doubt 'tis
