Pit Of Cherry

This is such a stunning tribute. Absolutely lovely.

Your writing at the moment is really lovely. I'm so glad I read this.

In terms of critique, I don't have much because your poem is beautifully written. If we were to nit pick, I'd do this in the last stanza to add some punch to that last line...
"
No
longer
of the lost
my wee bitty bit
we've been found
You and I
forever bound"

All I did was continue the ethose of full thoughts per line as you had them in the verses above that. I turned the final line into a sentence so that it was a powerful statement that stood on it's own.

Huge kudos tho... This is great!

Lovely reverie. I like AL's revision suggestion.

Why hey there Hall Of Famer, a hearty congrats to you my dear friend. It kept circling(I wonder why lol)so I jotted and it surprised me. Thank you Daniel for your words of kindness they are appreciated. Much love and deepest of respect,
me

Loved This , Survivor !

Has Some Corner Been Turned ?

Some Old Self Burned , Or Risen Again ?

Great To Read This , My Good Friend !

Hey there Blackwolf so good  to see  you, since  my father's  death I seem to have either reached or sunk to deeper deaths. Cherry will always be with me, she is my light. I will hop over tonight to see you I have been reading haven't replied yet. Much  love  and my upmost respect,  
Survivor

lovely picture - inspiring verses

Hello Sweet Oblivion, so good having a new friend grace my page, thank you so much for reading and leaving kind words, it's greatly appreciated. Much Respect
Survivor 🍒

I love how you can touch your reader while expressing your soul. Great

Hey there Keyisha, so good to see you again, I'm slowly gaining more expierence, and my writing's getting better, was hoping to achieve that, thank you so much for letting me know you like my work, it truly is inspiring. Many appreciations for all your many kindnesses. Deep Respect,
Survivor 🍒

omg, wow, if i can only write like this.
you have such a gift Survivor, the words are so beautiful and whimsical in this gorgeous poem just flows so easily and naturally.  your muse is one lucky person.

And I to too am a lucky one to have such praise from another so talented and graceful, I do so respect your work and   skill set, your opinion means do much. Thank you Layla for your many kindnesses greatly I appreciate. Deepest of respect,
Survivor