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Call To Action ~New Eye's Spin A Revise~
Life
is not
a race;
no chalked
finish lines or
stop watch marked winners
Slow,
methodical
an ever winding
expedition to one's
true self through mazes
and obstacles formidable
brick walls and traps sharp as razors
terrifying
intimidating
Sweat
will fall
tear's shall
drop blood may
be shed while traveling your path
Being
to hard
the desire
to give up are
side effects of exhaustion
Peace
can be
found through
self love nourish
mind, body and soul
always practice forgiveness
and compassion for yourself
Or
remain
blocked by
unbreakable
walls standing
at a crossroads
Great
strength is
needed courage,
tenacity too while
learning many lessons along your trek
Mistakes
are nothing
more than hard
earned education
Never
alone no
need to fear
in your journey
fighting this fight
I will be by your side
You
are far
stronger
than you believe
May
peace
be with
you my friend
The Squad
👣
Survivor
is not
a race;
no chalked
finish lines or
stop watch marked winners
Slow,
methodical
an ever winding
expedition to one's
true self through mazes
and obstacles formidable
brick walls and traps sharp as razors
terrifying
intimidating
Sweat
will fall
tear's shall
drop blood may
be shed while traveling your path
Being
to hard
the desire
to give up are
side effects of exhaustion
Peace
can be
found through
self love nourish
mind, body and soul
always practice forgiveness
and compassion for yourself
Or
remain
blocked by
unbreakable
walls standing
at a crossroads
Great
strength is
needed courage,
tenacity too while
learning many lessons along your trek
Mistakes
are nothing
more than hard
earned education
Never
alone no
need to fear
in your journey
fighting this fight
I will be by your side
You
are far
stronger
than you believe
May
peace
be with
you my friend
The Squad
👣
Survivor
Published 13th May 2018
Author's Note
Having the audacity to dream of
being a survivor surviving survival...
being a survivor surviving survival...
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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13th May 2018 12:00pm
Exceptional writing on this one. Crisp, clean and poignant.
Well done & thank you for the read!
Al x
Well done & thank you for the read!
Al x
13th May 2018 2:01pm
Hello Al, so good to see you, i hope this can be of help to someone, maybe avoid my mistakes. As you can see from the last 3 post I am learning and everyone's critique has helped immensely with clarity. Thank you so much for the RL, all your help, so many kindnesses so many appreciations. Deepest of Respect,
Survivor
Survivor
13th May 2018 12:16pm
13th May 2018 2:24pm
Hello MadameLavender, so good to see a new friend grace my page, it's deeply personal and my mission in life. I hope this can help someone, anyone even just one. Thank you for RL, it's always a good feeling when a poem cause that type of impact
Many appreciations for all your kindnesses. Much Respect,
Survivor 👣
Many appreciations for all your kindnesses. Much Respect,
Survivor 👣
