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Sudden Lust
Loving in motion
Sip intoxicating potion
Furry cup feeds
Satisfy my needs
Dripping lips
Mammoth hips
Sexy temptress
Tiny tits
Dirty mattress
Laid on floor
Throbbing purple
Ready for more
Lifting ankles
Legs on shoulders
Hits so hard
We rock like boulders
Two, three minutes
Is all its taken
Both our worlds
Quickly shaken.
Sip intoxicating potion
Furry cup feeds
Satisfy my needs
Dripping lips
Mammoth hips
Sexy temptress
Tiny tits
Dirty mattress
Laid on floor
Throbbing purple
Ready for more
Lifting ankles
Legs on shoulders
Hits so hard
We rock like boulders
Two, three minutes
Is all its taken
Both our worlds
Quickly shaken.
Published 14th Oct 2011
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14th Oct 2011 12:35pm
14th Oct 2011 12:45pm
14th Oct 2011 12:45pm
That's what makes many man feel powerless caused by being seduced and temted for too long.well put it's a quicky.
14th Oct 2011 1:03pm
Thanks for your comment, I'm glad that was your thought on this as that's exactly the feeling I was trying to express! Thanks again
14th Oct 2011 1:41pm
14th Oct 2011 1:53pm
Thank you for your kind words, I feel like I can be honest and feel no shame as when this happens Its usually a shared sudden climax..
Anonymous
14th Oct 2011 6:01pm
It's kind of like in sports, it shouldn't be 'sudden death, but 'sudden victory'. ; )
I like this one:
"Dripping lips
Mammoth hips
Sexy temptress
Tiny tits"
Enjoyed,
tornado
I like this one:
"Dripping lips
Mammoth hips
Sexy temptress
Tiny tits"
Enjoyed,
tornado
14th Oct 2011 6:40pm
Exactly! Thank you for your comment, That's also my favourite verse, however my misses hates it!
20th Oct 2011 8:16pm
reminds me of the night me and my brother took you round those birds house lol especially "Dripping lips
Mammoth hips
Sexy temptress
Tiny tits"
Mammoth hips
Sexy temptress
Tiny tits"
