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Liquid Words
Liquid Words
Liquid words which steam
into the mist in maiden eyes
which touch the libidinal mind
leaving epidermal oil of desire for bedroom play
lit with domme fantasies turning scarlet
with roses like a derriere dream
where skin melt becomes blood red wine
turning into tears poured
as libations for the Goddess.
Liquid words which steam
into the mist in maiden eyes
which touch the libidinal mind
leaving epidermal oil of desire for bedroom play
lit with domme fantasies turning scarlet
with roses like a derriere dream
where skin melt becomes blood red wine
turning into tears poured
as libations for the Goddess.
Published 6th May 2018
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8th May 2018 4:05am
Really love this whole piece
excellent lines such as how the "skin becomes blood red wine"
sexy , sexy indeed...
H
excellent lines such as how the "skin becomes blood red wine"
sexy , sexy indeed...
H
8th May 2018 4:09am
Most grateful my darling friend for letting me know this piece worked so well for you. I wasn't sure about it. I originally wrote it as an intro to my erotic poetry book. I am overjoyed to know you loved this verse. You are an angel. ;-)
Love,
John
Love,
John
8th May 2018 4:16am
Takes one to know one...
It takes very careful look into the pile
to notice the hidden brilliance beneath the popular laundries...
You are like a fabric softener... except re-useable
lol
<3
It takes very careful look into the pile
to notice the hidden brilliance beneath the popular laundries...
You are like a fabric softener... except re-useable
lol
<3
8th May 2018 11:46am
Yes, my darling. I am your fabric softener and reusable. You warm my heart sweetness. You have a mind which digs deep to find the hidden diamonds. I appreciate you so very much. ;-)
Love,
John
Love,
John
8th May 2018 5:09pm
batona rougey
has lovely faces
when they bow down
glimpses raise mine
all by now know it
more they bow
to lick it
what
guess it
go places
and see it how one's
sweet service raises
lovely faces leave indelible traces
has lovely faces
when they bow down
glimpses raise mine
all by now know it
more they bow
to lick it
what
guess it
go places
and see it how one's
sweet service raises
lovely faces leave indelible traces
8th May 2018 5:15pm
Thanks so much for your comment again. Your comment is poetry in itself. :)
John
John
23rd May 2018 5:21pm
23rd May 2018 5:38pm
Much thanks LilDragonFly. The lick of your words makes me all steamy my darling. ;)
XOXO
John
XOXO
John
Anonymous
27th May 2018 4:12am
"roses like a derriere dream"
that's one sunburnt, I mean sub rubbed glutteous maximus! lol whew!
that's one sunburnt, I mean sub rubbed glutteous maximus! lol whew!
27th May 2018 2:45pm
Much thanks Periwinkleblue! Love your play on words there my dear friend. Glad you enjoyed this little piece. ;)
Xo
John
Xo
John
30th Jul 2018 7:00pm
30th Jul 2018 7:18pm
Eerie, I thank thee most kindly milady. Love knowing this brought you such a feeling. :)
John
John
